GETTING UP LATE
Dave missed
the tram by seconds, and his desperate lunge for the door sent him flying into
the path of a cyclist. Cradling a broken wrist, he took a cab to the hospital,
from where, belatedly, he phoned his boss.
The Foreign
Secretary, annoyed by his absence, clutched a file of papers and rushed to her
waiting car, but her scarf caught in the revolving doors. She was
half-throttled before they could free her.
Dave watched
the dramatic arrival of a stretcher accompanied by security men, blissfully
unaware that his failure to get up in time had averted a war.
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Thanks to Brenda Cox we have a photograph this week that could almost be England - red double-decker bus driving on the right - but is in fact an Oriental tram! It reminded me of a story I wrote years ago, of which this is a reprise/rewrite, as I've been too busy gardening to think of a new one!
Amusing anecdote - and anything that averts a war is welcome!
ReplyDeleteThe unsung hero!
DeleteThat's so clever, Lizy!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Helen!
DeleteThey also serve who only lie-in and wait
ReplyDeleteOh yes, very clever! Thanks, Neil.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteQuite the drama there. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks, Rochelle!
DeleteFrom now on whenever I sleep in I'm going to think of it as inadvertently saving the world.
ReplyDeleteYou never know, though whether a boss would take that as an excuse is another matter.
DeleteVery clever surprise ending. I wonder if the boss is going to blame Dave for her struggle with the revolving door!
ReplyDeleteHe doesn't deserve that!
DeleteWow! That's a wonderful twist to a story full of mishaps! Well done, Alicia
ReplyDeleteThank you Alicia!
DeleteGood thing he was late! Well done.
ReplyDeleteWhat a shame he'll never know!
DeleteAn unsung hero. I love this, serious and slapstick in one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gah!
DeleteSo bumbling Dave is a hero..haha..love it!
ReplyDeleteNot all heroes wear capes!
DeleteDouble Shakespeare titles: "The Comedy of Errors" and "All's Well That Ends Well."
ReplyDeleteI am flattered that I reminded you of The Bard!
DeleteA very creative story. I enjoyed it! Happy gardening. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brenda!
DeleteA plausible chain of events. Nicely done. Sandra Crook
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra!
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