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GETTING UP LATE

 


GETTING UP LATE

Dave missed the tram by seconds, and his desperate lunge for the door sent him flying into the path of a cyclist. Cradling a broken wrist, he took a cab to the hospital, from where, belatedly, he phoned his boss.

The Foreign Secretary, annoyed by his absence, clutched a file of papers and rushed to her waiting car, but her scarf caught in the revolving doors. She was half-throttled before they could free her.

Dave watched the dramatic arrival of a stretcher accompanied by security men, blissfully unaware that his failure to get up in time had averted a war.

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Thanks to Brenda Cox we have a photograph this week that could almost be England - red double-decker bus driving on the right - but is in fact an Oriental tram! It reminded me of a story I wrote years ago, of which this is a reprise/rewrite, as I've been too busy gardening to think of a new one!

 


26 comments:

  1. Amusing anecdote - and anything that averts a war is welcome!

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  2. They also serve who only lie-in and wait

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    1. Oh yes, very clever! Thanks, Neil.

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  3. Dear Liz,


    Quite the drama there. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. From now on whenever I sleep in I'm going to think of it as inadvertently saving the world.

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    1. You never know, though whether a boss would take that as an excuse is another matter.

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  5. Very clever surprise ending. I wonder if the boss is going to blame Dave for her struggle with the revolving door!

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    1. He doesn't deserve that!

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  6. Wow! That's a wonderful twist to a story full of mishaps! Well done, Alicia

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  7. Good thing he was late! Well done.

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  8. An unsung hero. I love this, serious and slapstick in one.

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  9. So bumbling Dave is a hero..haha..love it!

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    1. Not all heroes wear capes!

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  10. Double Shakespeare titles: "The Comedy of Errors" and "All's Well That Ends Well."

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    1. I am flattered that I reminded you of The Bard!

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  11. A very creative story. I enjoyed it! Happy gardening. :)

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  12. A plausible chain of events. Nicely done. Sandra Crook

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