RUDOLPH
Kate and
Steve had rented the Air-BNB hoping their family could enjoy Christmas without fighting.
It was ostentatiously rugged, with faux log walls, but the sofas were comfortable
and the fire warm. Each day the children wore themselves out playing in the
snow, and the adults enjoyed long, relaxing evenings.
Then on
Christmas Eve Kate suddenly screamed, “That head moved!”
Steve almost
dropped his drink. “The nose is glowing red too!”
“Open the
door,” boomed a voice and Steve, ashen-faced, obeyed.
On a blast
of freezing air a rotund figure entered. “Come on, Rudolph, we’ve been waiting
for you.”
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Thanks to Alicia Jamtaas for this week's Firday Fictioneers' image, which has prompted me to dash off a story before my day begins with a stint at the charity shop. Seeing a photo of a log cabin with a fire is an unwelcome reminder that winter is not too far away - and I'm still hoping my grapes will ripen!
Blimey! Christmas already?
ReplyDeleteSorry!
DeleteAh, the first whiff of a Christmas candle.
ReplyDeleteCouldn't help it, Helen!
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteAw. This made me smile. Cute take on the prompt.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle.
DeleteMagical - though I feel for Rudolph stuck on the wall for 364 days a year!
ReplyDeleteAlas, poor Rudolph.
DeleteAlicia here. This made me laugh. I expected something macabre but the ending was delightful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alicia. I considered going the macabre route but this took over!
DeleteGranonine here. All I could think of was some way to fit this story into "Rudolp the Red-Nosed Reindeer" melody. Haven't figured it out yet :)
ReplyDeleteYou're trying to sing my story? Gosh!!
DeleteI love this take on the photo 😊
ReplyDeleteThanks, AJ.
DeleteOoooooo creepy. I loved this. Santa as a horror figure? Brilliant 👏 👏 👏
ReplyDeleteDoh, my name didn't pop up. Yay worked this time.
DeleteThe workings of this comment business are a mystery to me!
DeleteImagine Rudoph watching them all the time...
ReplyDeleteHey Liz, nice little story! Someone was asking my about my blog, which I haven't looked at for yonks. And then I fell down the rabbit hole... :)
ReplyDeleteGlad to be in your rabbit hole!
DeleteVery imaginative take on the prompt! I hope your grapes ripen before Christmas.
ReplyDeleteThey'll be wine before then, I hope!
DeleteHaha deers will be deers.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading!
DeleteMy kind of twist. Fun story, Liz!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jade!
DeleteFun piece, Liz.
ReplyDeleteLOL...you must reblog this for Christmas!
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