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THE ALLEY

 

THE ALLEY

During the day the flagstones rang with the footsteps of people on the way to the beach. Tourists bought souvenirs, or scarves to protect sunburned shoulders, locals stopped to drink coffee in the shade.

It was different at night, when the alley exuded menace, the walls echoing with the clink of bottles and frequent fights.

Each morning the shop owners swept up broken glass and syringes, saying nothing to the authorities for fear of discouraging trade, but it was more difficult to hide a body.

Ayla from the hairdresser's was still hosing down the blood when the police arrived.

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Perhaps the traders went a tad too far in their efforts not to lose trade, but needs must when times are tough! I know the deeling, as I am trying to drum up customers for my books, the latest of which can be found by clicking on the image on this page. Please do buy a copy!

Thanks to Rowena Curtin for the photo prompt and to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers on her blog  https://rochellewisoff.com/  You can read other stories by following the frog link on her blog.


30 comments:

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    1. We live such sheltered lives, don't we?

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  2. Those tourists get frisky at night

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    1. Having lived in a tourist area, I know it can be a mix of tourists and locals!

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  3. tourists can be both a victim or one of the crowd of miscreants. I would not be a victim, I would kick butt.

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    1. They have a bad reputation, but it's not always the tourists!

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  4. They'll be delighted she's cleaned up for them.

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  5. Heaven by day, hell by night. An all too common situation in some places.

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    1. Especially in areas with poor lighting.

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  6. Nicely observed, interesting how so many places of peace during the day become dangerous by dark.

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    1. Even my quiet village has its darker side!

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  7. Light and dark always walk hand in hand, in communities and in each person. The trick is to keep them in balance.

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  8. Oh dear, why did they tamper with the evidence? Interesting take.

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    1. The. Police won't have been too happy, that's for sure!

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  9. Dear Liz, such a full chilling piece. Thank you. Wishing you inspiring writing.

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  10. One wonders if the hairdresser wielded the scissors and delivered the killing blow. I always respect a women with sharp objects near my face. Ha ha.
    Tracey

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  11. As the song goes, "it was a good year for the undertaker." Interesting place, Liz.

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    1. I don't know that song!

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  12. Dear Liz,

    It sounds like a good place to stay away from.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  13. They are only making it worse by covering it up. Criminals are probably delighted.

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    1. The police won't be too pleased.

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  14. Dangerous place to have a shop!

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