SPADE
I left her taking her muddy trainers
off while I put the allotment tools in the car, dropping my guard for one
minute, but it was enough.
She screamed as he bundled her into his
van. By the time I’d got my car started they’d vanished. But she’d told me
about the hut on the moor – and what he’d done there.
I sped through back roads, hid my car,
and when he reached into the van to drag her out I hit him with the spade. Hard.
The hut’s just a heap of charred embers now. So is he.
I bought a new spade.
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Any mother would do the same, wouldn't she? Thanks to Ronda del Boccio for this week's image. To read other interpretations of the prompt, follow the frog link from https://rochellewisoff.com/
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What a great use of the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tessa!
DeleteThe new spade was a lovely touch
ReplyDeleteThanks, Neil - I had forensics in mind!
DeleteSounds like the punishment fit the crime. -Angela
ReplyDeleteI think so too, though the police might have other ideas!
DeleteHopefully she'll get away with it - he deserved what he got.
ReplyDeleteLet's hope she does.
DeleteIn this case the fire needs to hid all evidence, as the prisons are full. Mike H
ReplyDeleteThe fire is a good cover up as long as nobody digs through it!
DeleteQuick thinking mother. I'm glad she had an idea of who took her child and to where. The relief that she's safe and the abductor is dead is very strong here. Good thriller, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThank you. jade.
Deletecall spade a spade, she was lucky to save her daughter just time.
ReplyDeleteShe was indeed,
DeleteThis is Granonine. Great story, perfect ending. No mercy at all for pedophiles.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Granonine, I agree 100%
DeletePerfect use for the spade. Let's hope no one misses him.
ReplyDeleteOr if they do miss him, they don't want him enough to go looking.
DeleteDear Lia'
ReplyDeleteA mother does what a mother has to do. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
You and I would do the same.
DeleteCertainly! It's awful how quickly it could happen. And she did a good job of covering it up. Buying a new spade was a perfect detail. Nice one, Liz!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brenda!
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