ICE
‘Let’s go camping,’ he said.
‘In winter?’
‘Warm sleeping bags, a fire under
the stars, it’ll be romantic.’
It was easier to agree – he always
got his own way eventually.
I woke to the sound of a growl and
shook him awake. ‘Bears!’
He peered through the flap. ‘Can’t
see anything.’
‘There it is again – I’m scared.’
He went out, determined to prove
this mere female wrong, and slipped on the ice.
As the huge mouth closed around his
body I ran for the car.
True as I’m stood here.
'In a jail cell?'
Unfortunately the cops don’t
believe me.
Thanks as ever to Rochelle for running Friday Fictioneers, and to Roger Bultot for the photographic prompt. I've revived an old story for this week as I missed last week's FF, but I'm busy compiling a poetry book and subbing a novel, and my brain can't cope with too much at once these days!
Oh, I believe her, really I do
ReplyDeleteProbably because she fluttered her eyelashes at you?
DeleteDear Lizzy,
ReplyDeleteit sounds like no one really believes her. Should they? ;)
Shalom,
Rochelle
That's for you to decide.
DeleteWell dammit. That's not fair, is it?
ReplyDeleteI just love how you wrote this, Liz!
Thanks, Dale. Not fair, maybe, but possibly just?
DeleteI dunno. A tad extreme maybe ;-)
DeleteI guess it depends on how controlling he was :)
DeleteTrue dat!!
DeleteJames McEwan. A mere female gets the short straw every time. I have taken a light view, as he probably should have been bear lunch much earlier in their relationship.
ReplyDeleteA fair judgement, James, thank you!
DeleteUh oh. That's some story she's expecting them to believe. What a quirky story you've built here. I like the novelty of the situation you've put these characters in to reveal their relationship. A bear!
ReplyDeleteThere's been a lot of online chat about bear versus man!
DeleteLovely and wicked little twist there, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jade.
DeleteAbsolutely, so true, why won't they believe her? Bears do wake up from hibernation on occasion I heard. Fun story, Liz.
ReplyDeleteHibernation? Blame it on global warming :)
DeleteHmmmmm. Seems like the teethmarks would speak for themselves if they existed... -Angela
ReplyDeleteBut they ate him - there wasn't anything left!
DeleteWell, good luck to her getting out of this pickle. Another fine mess! And a very fine story, Liz!
ReplyDelete~ Nancy
Thank you for reading, Nancy. Somehow I think she's in trouble.
DeleteI believed her! Good story!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you're on her side, she needs all the support she can get!
DeleteThat was unfortunate.
ReplyDeleteHope they believe her & let her out of the jail.
All the best for your books, Liz! Take care.