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23.11.23

WALLS

 

WALLS

The walls were so ancient that even the graffiti was protected. Children ran heedlessly past them to school, housewives climbed the steps carrying bags of groceries, men walked along with their attention on their phones.

But Sarah noticed them. Sarah was old enough to have been that schoolchild, that housewife, long ago. Now she walked slowly, trailing her arthritic fingers over the old walls, feeling the weight of history, the grief of many thousands who had died for possession of these walls, her menfolk among them.

To Sarah each stone shrieked, ‘I am only stone – I am not worth those lives!’

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And still people are fighting over possession of places. Why cannot they live in peace, those who profess to love God? He is the same God, whatever we call Him, however we worship. Ask the mothers whether they think these wars deserve their children to be used as fodder.

Thanks are due to Rochelle for the photograph as well as for hosting Friday Fictioneers this week!

21 comments:

  1. To those outside a conflict, it always seems impenetrable why both sides don't just choose peace. To those inside, they always believe it's more complicated than that

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  2. A touching tale, Liz. Why, oh why?

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    1. The only comfort is that the majority of people think us. Unfortunately that doesn't stop the minority from spearding hatred and violence.

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  3. On the one hand it remains a mystery, on the other, it is human nature. Shall the two (mystery and human nature) ever reconcile?

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  4. She represents the reality of all the ordinary people trying to live ordinary lives in peace. There are billions of us. Well portrayed here. As Neil comments, however, the larger reality becomes more complicated. Sadly.

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    1. The slow release of those abductees is another kind of warfare.

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  5. Sandra Crook25/11/2023, 11:37

    Very profound, beautifully wrought. Well done.

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  6. This is beautiful, and I am inclined to agree with Sarah. I often wonder if so many wars would be fought if mothers were placed in charge.

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  7. Dear Liz,

    The eternal question "why?" Nicely written.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. The question has been asked for centuries yet nobody has come up with an answer that satisfies me.

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  8. Poignant Liz, when you boil it down to the fundamental reasons, the 'why?' makes even less sense. Well done.

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  9. Simply but not so simply.. life

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