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FIREWORKS

 

FIREWORKS

He travelled to Town each day on the 7.43 train, his nose buried in the newspaper, discouraging any attempts at conversation.

She only went out once a week, her eyes hidden behind dark glasses, and scuttled home with her shopping as if the outside world terrified her.

Their house was silent except for the occasional muffled cry – probably the television, neighbours decided.

Then one day some paramedics carried out a shrouded stretcher.

That night a cacophony of fireworks and loud music roused the neighbourhood as she danced half-naked around their garden, waving a bottle of champagne.

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I had a completely different story in mind, but this one demanded to come centre stage, so I gave in!

Thanks to Ted Strutz for the photo, and to Rochelle for running Friday Ficitoneers from her blog  https://rochellewisoff.com/  from where you can follow the frog link to other stories.

I was delighted to note that I sold three books last month! Not many, agreed, but better than none. You can get your own copy of my latest book by clicking on the cover image at the top of this page.

19 comments:

  1. The unrestrained joy could be a mistake. A bit of a giveaway

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    1. Màybe just a natural death?

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  2. Sounds like a very unhappy marriage to me, maybe some domestic abuse, with the dark glasses, I think it was him on the stretcher and she was celebrating - or am I reading to much into it - good story either way 🙌

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  3. Interesting wrap up to this story!

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  4. That's one way to celebrate...

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    1. There must be many who would envy her.

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  6. I'm going to assume he had a massive heart attack, leaving her free to enjoy the rest of her life OUT of prison!

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    1. That's what I had in mind too!

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  7. Lots to speculate about with the story, but that joyous celebration over someone's death is downright creepy to me. Good mystery, Liz.

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    1. Some of the neighbours will have been of the same opinion - those who ignored her cries.

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  8. Dear Liz,

    We can only imagine what the home life was like. Muffled cries turned to shouts of joy speaks volumes.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Dancing in the garden speaks for itself too!

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