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WHERE ARE WE?

 

WHERE ARE WE?

The alien commander watched Fredo and Shoda’s keyboard skills on the monitor. ‘They’re too bright – more trouble than they’re worth. We’ll catch some four-legs for food instead.’ He flicked a switch.

Fredo gasped. ‘I think it’s working! Hold tight, everyone!’

They clumped together in a nervous group, there was a brief sensation of weightlessness, and a moment later they landed in a ruined building. Slowly they picked themselves up, looking skywards, but the aliens had gone.

‘Everyone here?’ inquired a tremulous voice.

‘Where is here?’ someone replied.

‘It’s Earth,’ said Shoda, ‘with no aliens and no guards. That’s a good start.’

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Here, by popular request, is the third part of my alien story. You can find the first two in my blog archive on the right of this page. Thanks to J Hardy Carroll for the photo prompt, and to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers. To read other interpretations of the prompt, follow the frog link from her blog  https://rochellewisoff.com/

 


23 comments:

  1. This is not going to end well for somebody. But for them, or for us, isn't yet clear

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    1. I tried to end the story today, but it seems I failed!

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  2. I think the four legged ones might turn out to be cleverer than the humans, but what do I know?!

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  3. I think the four- legs are cattle,

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  4. A good start..now what?

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    1. I am trying to finish the story but it's taken on a life of its own!

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  5. I hope they don't make a mess of it, it's a precious thing that Earth!

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    1. Let's hope they've learned a salutory lesson.

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  6. Those aliens are always up to know good. Nice one, Lizy!

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    1. Never trust a biped with green skin.

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  7. A good start, indeed. :-)

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    1. Returning home is always a good start!

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  8. Dear Liz,

    This leads me to ask who are the aliens?

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Those who came down in the spaceship!

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  9. That is a good start!

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  10. No aliens and no guards sounds like a good start indeed!

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    1. Now they have to learn to survive in a new environment.

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  11. Thank goodness they transported away from the alien threat; yet knowing humans, they may not be out of danger just yet. Good story, Liz.

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    1. Thanks Jade. At least they're safe from aliens!

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  12. Thanks Keith - I wonder too!

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