FLOOD
The rain fell
for days, then weeks. Parents were at their wits’ end trying to keep their
children amused, so when the sun pushed a few faint rays through the clouds
they shooed them outside. ‘Go and play – come home at teatime.’
Shrieking
with delight, the entire village of children headed for the playground, leaving
their mothers to clean their homes, to gossip over cups of tea, to take a few
minutes’ rest.
The roar came
too late to warn them as tons of water raced downhill and swept through the
playground, leaving only twisted metal behind.
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There are families grieving now at the loss of a whole school full of children - an unimaginable pain. Thanks to Roger Bultot's photograph and Rochelle's blog, a few of us can express our horror by telling allegorical stories.
An awful tragedy
ReplyDeleteUnthinkable - and yet I did!
DeleteA very dark twist.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading, Iain.
DeleteChilling, Lizy.
ReplyDeleteOh, no! Terrible, beyond imagination!
ReplyDeleteOh dear. I have noticed that many playgrounds and soccer/football fields are built on floodplains. Spooky story in the end.
ReplyDeleteHouses too, Bill - disasters in the making.
DeleteGoodness! this went to the dark side quickly, but it a very well told story.
ReplyDeleteLizy, this is me, Alicia - not anonymous.
DeleteI'm having to change my replies from Anontmous every time now - someone tweaked something without asking!
DeleteYour story reminds us of such unimaginable tragedies. Nicely written, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda x
DeleteThis reads like a vision and it is very unsettling.
ReplyDeleteI hope it isn't the future!
DeleteA chilling end. I'd imagine a lifetime of guilt will follow.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately you're probably right.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteWhat an unfathomable tragedy. Every parent's nightmare. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you, Rochelle.
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