FIRST DAY OUT OF LOCKDOWN
The first day out of lockdown we met in the park,
blankets spaced two metres apart. There was some good-natured picnic envy – “You
brought Prosecco!” – “Are those real M&S pork pies?”
We wore disposable gloves to play Frisbee, danced in
our own little spaces to a radio, laughed like we hadn’t laughed for weeks, and
felt the tension drain away.
Until the Frisbee sailed over a hedge and the kids ran
to fetch it.
If I live to be a hundred I shall never forget those
screams, but the silence that followed was far worse.
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This story wrote itself in five minutes, which was a relief because I couldn't write anything last week! Also it's exactly 100 words without any editing, so I'll go with it. Hope you're all okay, lockdown, rioting, stress notwithstanding? I was allowed to visit Mum in the garden of her nursing home on Monday, and hope to see my kids later in the week, so things are slightly better.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting FF through thick and thin, and to Ted Strutz for the photgraph that prompted my story - and all the others on https://rochellewisoff.com/
Oh, and M&S Pork Pie - yes please! As for the kids, well that'll teach them to stray!
ReplyDeleteYou're a hard man, Iain!
Deletei guess with freedom comes responsibility.
ReplyDeleteIt does, but what kid knows that?
DeleteCrikey, you put a spin on that one, Lizy.
ReplyDeleteDid you really expect a happy ending from me?
Deleteall that good natured laughter turns to mighty big trouble within but a mere instant unfortunately
ReplyDeleteYou are right, very big trouble!
DeleteI can only imagine what was over the hedge. I'm saeing a decomposing body
ReplyDeleteEugh! Thanks for that image, Neil!
DeleteOh no! Don't tell me the kids got killed :/
ReplyDelete- justjoyfulness
I leave it to your imagination.
DeleteWell that story turned on a sixpence. Wow!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra - loved yours, as always.
DeleteIt started out so well, and then... Oh dear.
ReplyDeleteHere's mine!
The best laid plans...
DeleteLoved it. And I imagine death was involved. And that is often how it happens - everything fine one minute, but then, in the blink of an eye, things change irrevocably. Covid is adding a more intense element to human behaviour. Interesting times...
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments.
DeleteI think I got a crick in my neck from the spin you just sent it on! Lulling us into a false sense of security like that... so well done, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dale. Hope you find a cure for your neck!
DeleteI enjoyed your story, Liz. Glad you got to see your mom.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jade. The next step will be to hug Mum - we both miss that!
DeleteKiller frisbees?
ReplyDeleteShalom,
Rochelle
If that's where your imagination takes you!
DeleteLiz you surely twisted that one good and hard at the end! I don't think I want to know what was on the other side!
ReplyDeleteNothing pleasant, that's for sure.
DeleteYeeow - what a savage twist! I love the way you use M&S branding to lull us into a sense of banality and false peace.
ReplyDeleteThanks Penny.
DeleteNow that was an unexpected twist. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteMaybe the fear is even worse...
ReplyDeleteMaybe.
DeleteScary...but yet I laughed.
ReplyDeleteI wonder what tickled your funny bone?
DeleteKids will be kids ��.
ReplyDeleteGlad you got out. Lock down feels a bit too much at times.
REading this on July 4th, we actually went to the pub today!
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