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FIRST DAY OUT OF LOCKDOWN


FIRST DAY OUT OF LOCKDOWN

The first day out of lockdown we met in the park, blankets spaced two metres apart. There was some good-natured picnic envy – “You brought Prosecco!” – “Are those real M&S pork pies?”
We wore disposable gloves to play Frisbee, danced in our own little spaces to a radio, laughed like we hadn’t laughed for weeks, and felt the tension drain away.

Until the Frisbee sailed over a hedge and the kids ran to fetch it.
If I live to be a hundred I shall never forget those screams, but the silence that followed was far worse.
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This story wrote itself in five minutes, which was a relief because I couldn't write anything last week! Also it's exactly 100 words without any editing, so I'll go with it. Hope you're all okay, lockdown, rioting, stress notwithstanding? I was allowed to visit Mum in the garden of her nursing home on Monday, and hope to see my kids later in the week, so things are slightly better.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting FF through thick and thin, and to Ted Strutz for the photgraph that prompted my story - and all the others on    https://rochellewisoff.com/




36 comments:

  1. Oh, and M&S Pork Pie - yes please! As for the kids, well that'll teach them to stray!

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  2. i guess with freedom comes responsibility.

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  3. Crikey, you put a spin on that one, Lizy.

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    1. Did you really expect a happy ending from me?

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  4. all that good natured laughter turns to mighty big trouble within but a mere instant unfortunately

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  5. I can only imagine what was over the hedge. I'm saeing a decomposing body

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  6. Oh no! Don't tell me the kids got killed :/
    - justjoyfulness

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  7. Well that story turned on a sixpence. Wow!

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    1. Thanks Sandra - loved yours, as always.

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  8. It started out so well, and then... Oh dear.

    Here's mine!

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  9. Loved it. And I imagine death was involved. And that is often how it happens - everything fine one minute, but then, in the blink of an eye, things change irrevocably. Covid is adding a more intense element to human behaviour. Interesting times...

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  10. I think I got a crick in my neck from the spin you just sent it on! Lulling us into a false sense of security like that... so well done, Liz.

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    1. Thank you, Dale. Hope you find a cure for your neck!

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  11. I enjoyed your story, Liz. Glad you got to see your mom.

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    1. Thanks Jade. The next step will be to hug Mum - we both miss that!

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    1. If that's where your imagination takes you!

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  13. Liz you surely twisted that one good and hard at the end! I don't think I want to know what was on the other side!

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  14. Yeeow - what a savage twist! I love the way you use M&S branding to lull us into a sense of banality and false peace.

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  15. Now that was an unexpected twist. Nicely done.

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  16. Maybe the fear is even worse...

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  17. Scary...but yet I laughed.

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    1. I wonder what tickled your funny bone?

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  18. Kids will be kids ��.
    Glad you got out. Lock down feels a bit too much at times.

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    1. REading this on July 4th, we actually went to the pub today!

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