THE SLAVE
“Who will buy this lovely young virgin?”
“I will,” Petrus said and the hammer
fell.
His home was a humble pottery in Stabiae,
but a fig-tree shaded the yard, the kitchen was cool, and when Yani gave birth
to a son, Petrus freed her.
One day he announced, “I go to sell
pots in Surrentum,” and Yani said, “I will come too.”
Petrus stared as she packed all their
belongings into the cart. “Shall I bring my wheel?” he joked.
She glanced at the mountain and
shivered, clutching her child. “You can buy another – now hurry!”
They were ten miles away when
Vesuvius erupted.
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Stabiae was a small village overlooking the Bay of Naples which, like Pompeii, was buried under metres of volcanic ash when Mt Vesuvius erupted. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stabiae
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I took this photograph on our village green at Halloween a couple of years ago - this was our local supermarket's offering to the festivities. Thanks to Rochelle for using another of my photos - I shall enjoy reading what the rest of Friday Ficitoneers thought of it. If you are not a FF contributor, you can find us by following the blue frog link from https://rochellewisoff.com/ - after you've left a comment here, of course.
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I took this photograph on our village green at Halloween a couple of years ago - this was our local supermarket's offering to the festivities. Thanks to Rochelle for using another of my photos - I shall enjoy reading what the rest of Friday Ficitoneers thought of it. If you are not a FF contributor, you can find us by following the blue frog link from https://rochellewisoff.com/ - after you've left a comment here, of course.
And - if you click on the book cover at the top of this page, that link will take you to the Amazon page where you can buy my new book HELTER-SKELTER, which is the story of Albie, a boy growing up in Kent, South-east England, between the wars - a completely different genre from my last book, A Volcanic Race. For those of you who bought AVR, I am still working on the sequel and hope to publish it in time for Christmas.
That's deceptively complex, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThank you - I think!
DeleteI hope she's better looking than the one in the photo. :)
ReplyDeleteHeehee! Thanks for commenting, Russell.
DeleteI bet he is glad he bought her and treated her well.
ReplyDeleteI am sure he is.
DeleteThere are worse masters. Lucky escape for her twice!
ReplyDeleteShe repaid her debt in full, I think.
DeleteA timely exit. Thanks for a great photo, Liz.
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome - I sent Rochelle quite a few, ages ago - this is the second one she's used.
DeleteIt speaks for Petrus that Yani didn't leave him after he freed her. And what a lucky escape they had.
ReplyDeletePetrus was blessed that Yani had the gift of Sight.
DeleteAh, but they got away!
ReplyDeleteI like your take on the prompt - the mummy in the trolley looks like the figures from Pompeii. I enjoyed reading about two nice people who narrowly avoid a catastrophe. Your prose style is lucid and a pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteThank you Penny.
DeleteSounds like he earned her love, in that she stayed with him and that she saved them all
ReplyDeleteHe did indeed - a nice man by the standards of the day.
DeleteOh! Such a different take on the prompt. I love it. Very, very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alicia
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteI love where you went with your own photo. I can always count on you not to be too literal. ;) Good one, albeit, with a tragic ending.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle. Tragic for many but not, thanks to her instincts, for Yani and her family.
Deleteglad they got away :)
ReplyDelete~Priorhouse
such a different take on the prompt - and really felt a lot of story in such few words...
ReplyDeletenice job
~Priorhouse
Thanks Prior - in fact my story started life at 200 words, so it's even more truncated that before!
DeleteI assumed they made their escape and reading the comments I'm glad I was correct. A small kindness repaid.
ReplyDeleteQuite a big kindness, in fact - her freedom!
DeleteHer instincts kicked in at the right moment! Nicely done Liz and thanks for the photo prompt this week :)
ReplyDeletePetrus was fortunate in his choice of woman.
DeleteAh, thanks, Liz, for the background on the picture. Your local supermarket sounds like a lot of fun and your story is terrific. The characters instantly lived for me. I cared about both of them and you took them off in an imaginative and unexpected direction, Jilly, Sugar on the Bee.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jilly.
DeleteWhat a smart lady.
ReplyDeleteAnd gifted. Thanks for commenting, Dawn.
Deletei was hoping against hope that they survived. but the story was inspired by this week's photo prompt, do they probably didn't.
ReplyDeleteOh but they did! The photo made me think of her enslavement, which she escaped thanks to Petrus.
DeleteGreat piece in so few words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa.
DeleteI really liked your take on your wonderfully imaginative photo! I'm glad to know that they Petrus and Yani survived. I wasn't sure if 10 miles was far enough away to escape such a mighty volcano.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, Liz, I just noticed that in this big world, you live only 30 miles away from me!
Really? We must meet - I thought most of FF lived in America!
DeleteLoved your historical fiction. That slave girl had good instincts.
ReplyDeleteShe did, and got them away in time.
DeleteI enjoyed those 100 words - thank you fro sharing.
ReplyDeletethanks for commenting
ReplyDeleteNice one! :)
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