ISLAND PICNIC
When Tom
was young his parents used to take him over the reed-bed to picnic in the
summer-house.
“Walk
quietly,” his father would warn, “Don’t wake the troll,” and Tom would tiptoe
across in delighted terror.
Later,
Tom played the troll game with his own children, and even his worldly-wise
grandchildren trod softly over the bridge.
One
afternoon, at an island picnic, Tom collapsed. His sons raced homewards
carrying him, their footsteps loud on the bridge, and they were halfway across
when a massive arm reached up and snatched the body.
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Firstly I am proud to tell you that I have had a poem accepted for World Poetry Day, which you can read under the 'Melting Pot' tab on Liz Brownlee's blog at: https://messagepoemstotheplanet.wordpress.com/
Secondly I would like to say 'Welcome' to another two followers who have appeared out of the blue - thank you for your interest in my blog!
Secondly I would like to say 'Welcome' to another two followers who have appeared out of the blue - thank you for your interest in my blog!
And thirdly, this week's photo was taken by Adam Ickes. I remember the photo, so presumably I have written a story about it before, but I can't remember when or what, so here's a new one! The prompt was posted for Friday Fictioneers on Rochelle's blog https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/ To read other stories, follow the Blue Frog trail from there.
Great story, Lizy. Nicely constructed with an ending I didn't expect. Could just see that arm weaving up and snatching old Tom away. Really good
ReplyDeleteThanks Lynn - glad I managed to draw you a picture!
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteDelightful story. I didn't see that end coming. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
I wonder what you did expect?
DeleteLove the ending and congratulations on the poem.
ReplyDeleteThaks Louise, on both counts.
DeletePerfect way to end it. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my story, Adam, thank you.
DeleteThat mental image was overpowering. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI just hope he was dead before the troll took him!
DeleteWhat a great troll story.
ReplyDeleteGoes to show you that even in death someone may be trolling for you.
Randy
Thanks - I hadn't thought of it that way!
DeleteTrolls!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful, every bit of it. And congrats on the poem. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ga, I'm glad you enjoyed my Grimm fairy tale!
Deletei guess the trolls were ready to have some fun! just wondering what it took them long. :)
ReplyDeleteThey only wake up if you make a lot of noise - surely you know that?
DeleteWell, I wasn't expecting that! Great little yarn.
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Glad the surprise worked!
DeleteA much gentler, but still hungry, Troll than mine Liz. A great story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Michael - I'm sure even trolls have different character traits.
DeleteSo it seems the troll was real indeed and that Tom was wise!
ReplyDeleteLet's hope Tom's end WAS 'what he would have wanted'.
DeleteYou’ve made me laugh out loud and feel guilty for it.
ReplyDeleteCheers, Dawn! A laugh is okay :)
DeleteGood story, Liz. That was a great twist at the end. Congratulations on having your poem accepted for World Poetry Day! :) --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteThanks Suzanne - I hope you went to the poetry site and read some of them?
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