CAYUCO
A fishing
boat spotted the ninth cayuco of the year wallowing in the trough between
massive full-moon waves, its occupants’ faces grey with sickness and
terror.
Tourists
took photographs as people struggled up stone steps to policia and medicos, silver blankets and bottled water on the harbour wall.
There were disbelieving gasps when another layer was revealed – second-class passengers
under the feet of the first, their hair and clothing soaked in brine and vomit.
Just one
woman remained, searching desperately through the filth until she found, wedged
beneath the lowest seat, a bundle that had stopped crying hours before they sighted land.
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The above photograph, taken by Georgia Koch, is this week's prompt for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. When you've left a comment on my story (please!) you can read other writers' interpretations by following the Blue Frog link from her blog
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/
My story is based on fact. When we lived in Tenerife I witnessed similar scenes in Las Galletas, the village where I shopped - these photos were taken at sea and on the beach there.
Good one, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThanks Robert.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteThis is heart breaker. More so that it's based on facts. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
I will never forget standing on the beach watching this drama unfold.
DeleteSo tragic. Very well done, Liz.
ReplyDeleteSuch tragedies are still happening everywhere, every day.
DeleteI had the same impression when I opened the prompt. We have had similar tragedies in the States. Desperate immigrants, just wanting to find a better life. Tragic.
ReplyDeletePainful to read,
Tracey @WhatsOnYourMindDoc
It#s happening in England too, only the cross channel journey is shorter and the French are doing nothing to stop them.
DeleteThis is even more than heartbreaking... the many layers from the spectators perspective to the final story about the devastated mother.
ReplyDeleteWhen you've witnessed such tragedies you never forget them.
DeleteThis brought tears to my eyes, Liz. You have a real gift in managing to convey so much in so few words.
ReplyDeleteSusan at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
Thanks Susan - I enjoy the challenge.
DeleteVery contemporary take. Great write.
ReplyDeleteSo much is in the news these days.
DeleteA heartbreaking story, even more so since class doesn't stop before desperation. Great writing, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThose who could pay the people traffickers more got the best seats - survival of the richest at its most basic.
DeleteWow. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dawn - just thanks.
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