HOUSEPROUD
Josie was awfully proud of her home
so everyone took off their shoes
at the door, though the smell of their socks
was a downside of her houseproud rules.
After one party her guests had all gone
and she tidied the hallway, to find
that a pair of red boots with white fur round the top
had mistakenly been left behind.
Then a jolly, fat man with a big, booming voice
appeared from the garden out back:
‘I’m afraid I’ve forgotten to put on my boots
and I wonder – have you seen my sack?’
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Failing inspiration for a regular story, I dashed off a ten-minute seasonal poem this week, prompted by Ted Strutz's photo - if this is his hallway, he must have a large family!
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers, and Happy Hanukka to my friends, especially to those who celebrate it.
Ho ho ho
ReplyDeleteIndeed!
DeleteI think this works perfectly well, Liz!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the year my great-aunt left with my boots (too big for her), leaving me hers (too small for me)! Thankfully, she was staying overnight nearby and I was able to get them switched :)
That sounds like a good memory!
DeleteIt was :)
DeleteGranonine here. I loved the twist on this one, the Jolly Old Elf in person :)
ReplyDeleteThe Big Man himself!
DeleteNicely done - I hope the sack was retrieved or the children will be disappointed!
ReplyDeleteIt was under the stairs - you can relax!
DeleteForget the boots. He lost his sack? He's in trouble now. :-)
ReplyDeleteToo much Christmas punch can do that!
DeleteA sack full of gifts!
ReplyDeleteDid the guests disperse with return gifts?! :)
Merry Christmas in advance.
There's a troubling thought!
DeleteI'm glad he followed the rules - those boots would leave soot prints all over her floors!!
ReplyDeleteYou're right - I hadn't thought of that!
DeleteThank goodness he remembered where he'd left them!
ReplyDeleteAll those disappointed children - it doesn't bear thinking about!
DeleteA well-mannered Santa. Of course. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteDear LIz,
ReplyDeleteA clever "dashed-off" poem.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks, Rochelle - sometimes they just flow. Not often enough, naturally!
DeleteWhat a fun and clever poem. I bet Santa had a bit too much eggnogg.
ReplyDeleteDo people still drink eggnog?
DeleteI'm guessing those boots smell of sweat and reindeer. Fun spin on the image.
ReplyDeleteWhat a charming thought!
DeleteI love that you wrote a Christmas story!
ReplyDeleteIt's that time of year!
DeleteThis fits perfectly! I wonder if Santa takes his shoes off at my house?
ReplyDeleteDepends on your house rules, I guess.
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