PAINTING MEMORIES
Street noises surround him
but he hears only birdsong,
Tourists take photos
while he sees only mountains.
In a crowded city
he paints from memory -
cherry blossom and bamboo
cranes on chrysanthemums.
Bicycle bells ring
car horns blare,
but he hears the rattle of bamboo
and his brush moves
in peaceful strokes
to music only he can hear
while he paints water and wind.
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A man so absorbed in his work that he could be alone - I wish I could shut the outside world off like that when I choose! When I lived in Tenerife I sat in cafes to write, as I knew enough Spanish to interact with people, but not enough for background chatter to intrude. Now I am back in England I am too easily distracted.
Thanks to Brenda Cox for the photograph that prompted this week's Friday Fictioneers' stories. To read others you can follow the link from https://rochellewisoff.com/
AND FINALLY - I wish you a very happy new year.
I found that quite peaceful. Shutting out the world at times is definitely a good idea.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Iain - peaceful is how he seemed to me.
DeleteThat was poetic, Liz. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sandra - the image called for poetry.
DeleteA wonderfully lyrical piece, Lizy
ReplyDeleteI am happy you liked it, Neil, thank you.
DeleteThat was beautiful, I liked how you set the peaceful images in his mind opposite the noisy world outside. And a peaceful, healthy New Year to you.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gah, I like that you saw the connections in my poem. Happy New Year.
DeleteSuch a lovely prose passage. He keeps nature in his heart. The muse is kind to him.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Jade.
DeletePainting what he senses not what he sees or hears. Pure contentment. A delightful tale, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith - a bit like FF, in a way!
DeleteAbsolutely beautiful poetry. I love your post.
ReplyDeleteThank you YT.
DeleteI would so love to be able to shut out the world like that... Beautifully done, Liz.
ReplyDeleteSo would I, Dale, Hope you find your ring xx
DeleteI always come back the week after to see your response as I cannot get it without getting everyone else's comments as well...
DeleteAs you know, thanks to FB, I did!
Happy New Year to you, as well :)
ReplyDeleteThe main distraction I have is my husband. He tries, but often fails, to leave me alone when I'm writing. I can't just shut him out, although sometimes I do shut him down :)
Thanks, Linda. Husbands can be a trial at times 😊
DeleteThat sounds so lovely and poetic :)
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteA beautifully written story, Liz!
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda - sometimes my best poems are those written quickly.
DeleteNicely done. A good feeling read.
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it, Bill x
DeleteThis was lovely. The breath and rhythm of it. The brush's sound ...
ReplyDeleteThank you very much. 😊
DeleteThe beauty of your words matches the paintings. Lovely idea of peace amid the chaos.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jen.
Deleteyou just outdo yourself again. well done. :)
ReplyDeleteOh plaridel, you are so kind! ☺️
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteA poetic piece reflecting the artist's soul. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you, Rochelle, as you càn tell, I loved this week's picture.
DeleteWhat lovely contrasts between the bustle of the city and the peace of the artist's mind! You conjure up some delightful sensory images with your carefully chosen vocabulary. It's a meditative story.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Penny, for such a detailed and thoughtful comment.
DeleteLove to see people painting. It is so creative.
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