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PAINTING MEMORIES

 

PAINTING  MEMORIES

Street noises surround him

but he hears only birdsong,

Tourists take photos

while he sees only mountains.

In a crowded city

he paints from memory -

cherry blossom and bamboo

cranes on chrysanthemums.

Bicycle bells ring

car horns blare,

but he hears the rattle of bamboo

and his brush moves

in peaceful strokes

to music only he can hear

while he paints water and wind.

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A man so absorbed in his work that he could be alone - I wish I could shut the outside world off like that when I choose! When I lived in Tenerife I sat in cafes to write, as I knew enough Spanish to interact with people, but not enough for background chatter to intrude. Now I am back in England I am too easily distracted.

Thanks to Brenda Cox for the photograph that prompted this week's Friday Fictioneers' stories. To read others you can follow the link from  https://rochellewisoff.com/

AND FINALLY - I wish you a very happy new year.


36 comments:

  1. I found that quite peaceful. Shutting out the world at times is definitely a good idea.

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    1. Thank you, Iain - peaceful is how he seemed to me.

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  2. That was poetic, Liz. Loved it.

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    1. Thank you, Sandra - the image called for poetry.

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  3. A wonderfully lyrical piece, Lizy

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    1. I am happy you liked it, Neil, thank you.

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  4. That was beautiful, I liked how you set the peaceful images in his mind opposite the noisy world outside. And a peaceful, healthy New Year to you.

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    1. Thank you, Gah, I like that you saw the connections in my poem. Happy New Year.

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  5. Such a lovely prose passage. He keeps nature in his heart. The muse is kind to him.

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  6. Painting what he senses not what he sees or hears. Pure contentment. A delightful tale, Liz.

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    1. Thanks Keith - a bit like FF, in a way!

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  7. Absolutely beautiful poetry. I love your post.

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  8. I would so love to be able to shut out the world like that... Beautifully done, Liz.

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    1. So would I, Dale, Hope you find your ring xx

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    2. I always come back the week after to see your response as I cannot get it without getting everyone else's comments as well...
      As you know, thanks to FB, I did!

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  9. Happy New Year to you, as well :)

    The main distraction I have is my husband. He tries, but often fails, to leave me alone when I'm writing. I can't just shut him out, although sometimes I do shut him down :)

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    1. Thanks, Linda. Husbands can be a trial at times 😊

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  10. That sounds so lovely and poetic :)

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  11. A beautifully written story, Liz!

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    1. Thanks Brenda - sometimes my best poems are those written quickly.

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  12. Nicely done. A good feeling read.

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  13. This was lovely. The breath and rhythm of it. The brush's sound ...

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  14. The beauty of your words matches the paintings. Lovely idea of peace amid the chaos.

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  15. you just outdo yourself again. well done. :)

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  16. Dear Liz,

    A poetic piece reflecting the artist's soul. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thank you, Rochelle, as you càn tell, I loved this week's picture.

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  17. What lovely contrasts between the bustle of the city and the peace of the artist's mind! You conjure up some delightful sensory images with your carefully chosen vocabulary. It's a meditative story.

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    1. Thank you, Penny, for such a detailed and thoughtful comment.

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  18. Love to see people painting. It is so creative.

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