It felt like I’d been running for hours, though it was
only ten minutes. Long enough for me to be completely spent, but I had an ace
up my sleeve.
I moved slightly to the left – he did the same.
I slid to the right – he mirrored my movement, a
derisory smirk on his face, but now I knew I had the upper hand.
Step by step, inch by inch, I manoeuvred him into
position, and as he raised his gun to fire I hit the red button.
A thousand tons of rocket hit him – they never did
find all the pieces.
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Yes, I know it's really a telescope but hey! this is imaginary, right? I would never actually press that button, honest, officer! Anyhow, if you like my murderous story, do please leave a comment. And also consider buying one of my novels - the link to CAROUSEL, my latest book, is at the top of this page, disguised as a book cover.
Thanks to Douglas MacIlroy for the photograph, and congratulations to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for holding the fort as manager of Friday Fictioneers for nine whole years!
Ruthless!
ReplyDeleteThat's me - tough through and through!
DeleteNow that's what I call overkill
ReplyDeleteJust making sure.
DeleteWhat a great, action-rich take on the prompt. I especially like the mirroring parts.
ReplyDeleteThank you, GAH.
DeleteI don't know. I say, go for it. Wipe the sucker out.
ReplyDeleteHe had a gun, what else could I do?
DeleteWell, at least there's not much clean-up. They won't need a body bag--just a small Ziplock :)
ReplyDeleteOr a hose?
DeleteReminds me of 'The Rock' with Nicolas Cage. Great story!
ReplyDeleteA film? Thanks for reading.
Deletegreat action story. well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteYou can make it anything you like... It's called free writing! Well done!
ReplyDeleteA lot of others have seen a rocket or spaceship too!
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteIt's all about what you see, isn't it? Nicely done.
shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle x
DeleteHe was messng with wrong person, that's for sure! Nice one Liz.
ReplyDeleteTricky! I'm glad your strategy took out the threat.
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