“Mum, can we go on the Jungle ride?”
The painted scenery was full of smiling monkeys,
bright parrots and unlikely flowers, the carriages child-sized. Not one of
those rides where she’d have to hold their hands and pretend she wasn’t scared too.
Belinda paid the man, waved them through the palm-frond curtain, and went to
buy a latte.
She was only gone two minutes, but when she returned
the ride was shut and silent, the carriages empty. She read the notice pinned
to the scenery.
Jungle Drop
No responsibility taken for any
loss.
Then she heard the roar.
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A mother's nightmare - sorry! This week's story is pure fiction, prompted by Alicia Jamtoas' photograph on Rochelle's blog https://rochellewisoff.com/
Have you noticed how we have nothing to talk about at the moment? Once the usual questions are done - 'Are you well?' and 'Have you had your jab?' - the conversation falters. Not surprising really, as nothing else is happening. We can't make plans, even to join friends for a coffee or a beer. Holidays are off the cards too, unless one is prepared to endure ten days in an airport hotel when coming home. So we hunker down, wrap up against the bitter cold, read, eat and watch TV.
Those of us who write can escape into the worlds we create, and if you fancy a trip to my imaginary world, the last book in my Living Rock series is out on Amazon - click on the cover image at the top of this page to access it, and the first three books as well.
Oh no! What have you done with them, Lizy?!
ReplyDeleteEaten by lions?
DeleteWow! Wasn't expecting that.
ReplyDeleteGlad the surprise worked, Wilts.
DeleteI imagine that ride's insurance bill must be hefty
ReplyDeleteThey posted a disclaimer - not their fault if the parents don't read it!
DeleteI imagine that ride's insurance bill must be hefty
ReplyDeleteAnd here you are again, Neil!
DeleteA mother's nightmare! You turn your back for one seemingly innocuous moment (or ride) and disaster. Well told, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dora. We should never let them out of our sight till they're at least twenty!
DeleteReminds me of Ray Bradbury's The Veldt, Liz.
ReplyDeleteGrim stuff.
Is that one I should read, or will it keep me awake at night?
DeleteGood one Liz, a parent's nightmare indeed.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Iain. I've no idea why I write such stories - if it came on TV I'd turn it off!
DeleteJust when I was thinking I'd like that ride, you hit us with that alarming ending!
ReplyDeleteSorry about that, Keith!
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteSadly those nightmares do come true. Waiting for my jab here.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Waiting for your jab? Right now while you're writing, or still waiting for the call?
DeleteOh dear! That did not go as expected!
ReplyDeleteI shouldn't write stuff like this - I can't get that poor mother out of my head now.
DeleteA shock ending, for sure. I think Mama wishes she were dead, too, right then.
ReplyDeleteQuite likely - I know I would.
Deletesadly, disaster can strike at any moment.
ReplyDeleteAlthough one doesn't expect a children's ride to be predatory.
DeleteOh no, she was lulled into complacency. A child's ride afterall. A nightmare for sure, but so well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brenda x
DeleteRelief turns to horror on the spot.
ReplyDeleteHorror is right - will she ever find them??
DeleteI can't get her out of my head, the poor woman. Like you say, a nightmare for any Mom who's left her kids for a moment.
ReplyDeleteYet we have to allow them a little independence - it's a fine balance.
DeleteLOL wow I see what mood you're in this week! :D Good one.
ReplyDeleteRonda
Heehee! If I wrote what I'm really feeling at times, I'd be arrested!
DeleteNever turn your back.
ReplyDeleteAin't that the truth!
DeleteYikes! I feel panic setting in.
ReplyDeletePanic is the correct emotion.
DeleteLizy, the above message is from me, Alicia Jamtaas. Couldn't get my WordPress URL to come up.
ReplyDeleteAlicia, I'm using blogspot, not WordPress.
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