EARLY TO SCHOOL
Sally’s hard-won custody battle came at a price – new name, different area, change of school, and a menial job that meant she had to drop Josie at school early, with only the janitor to watch her.
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It's an unwritten rule, isn't it, that a bag, or a full trolley, marks a place in the queue - at least, in those countries where people queue rather than scramble for places.
I missed last week, being unable to come up with a story that felt original enough. Well done to those of you who wrote one. Thanks to J Hardy Carroll for this week's photo and to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers on her blog https://rochellewisoff.com/
On the subject of writing, my 5 yr old granddaughter decided Sunday lunch at Nan's warranted a menu - here is the result. The phonetic spelling must be read aloud to get its full meaning!
NB - we made the lemn coocees to accompany the I screem.
PS - click on the book cover (top right on this page) to buy the last book in my Living Rock series. The whole series would make a neat Christmas present for anyone - teen to adult - who enjoys stories where reality is slightly askew but the people, their hopes and fears, are as real as ever.
Dear Liz,
ReplyDeleteYour granddaughter's menu is adorable. What flavor I screem. ;)
How sad when former couples use the children as weapons against each other.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Vanilla. She doesn't like any other flavours.
DeleteOh no! This is like watching a child abduction thriller... Do hope there's a Part Two with a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteThat will depend on next week's photo!
DeletePooding I Screem for me please! The note is a nice antidote to the menace of the story! Nicely written (by both!)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Iain, from both of us.
Deletea sad tale, Lizy
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading it, U.
DeleteThe comment labelled for some reason as unknown was from me, Neil MacDonald
ReplyDeleteAh! Hi Neil.
Deletei feel sorry for the kid. hopefully, they can make things right for her sake.
ReplyDeleteJust to be abducted like that must be traumatic, I doubt they'll settle things peacefully.
DeleteThe child always loses in these traumatic situations. I've seen too many of them.
ReplyDeleteSome of the social workers' reports I have seen would turn your hair white.
DeleteNobody wins in custody wars :( Good telling of a sad reality, Liz.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jade.
DeleteA tragic ending to your story. I wonder if she ever got her daughter back?
ReplyDeleteI do enjoy I Screem for Pooding :-)
We all scream for I screem!
DeleteSo sad when kids are treated as possessions. A sorry tale indeed.
ReplyDeleteHere's mine!
There are far too many parents who regard their children as property.
DeleteThis is an all too common tale and the ultimate victim in the child.
ReplyDeleteWhat must it do to their lives, their future happiness?
DeleteWhat was so clever about this writing was that I didn't fully grasp what had happened until that final sentence.
ReplyDeleteYou're not the only one to say that, Susan. I suppose because I knew where it was heading, it surprised me that it wasn't clear earlier!
DeleteWhat a terrible story but an adorable picture at the end. When I stay terrible, I mean very well written with an ending I did not see coming until it hit me as I imagine her daughter's disappearance must have hit the mother. :-(
ReplyDeleteAnne from annehiga.com
Thanks for reading and commenting, Anne - it must be every mother's worst nightmare.
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