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BY THE PRICKING OF MY THUMBS - a story in 100 words



BY THE PRICKING OF MY THUMBS
It was so hot in the campervan that the children wanted to sleep in the tent. Delia was reluctant to let them but Barclay said, “The security guard patrols regularly – they’ll be fine.”
“I’ve got a bad feeling...” Delia demurred, but when he winked and added, “We’ll be alone for a night,” she blushed and yielded. The site was well-lit, the pool’s surface reflecting the orange lamps – what could go wrong?
Eventually the children’s giggling ceased, the van rocked to a standstill, and all was silent. Only then did a tentacle slither up from the deep end.
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This story, prompted by C.E Ayr's photograph, is my first for this year, and written in a hurry, as it is my granddaughter's 5th birthday today and I am taking the cake. I have been making Smartie cakes since my own children were small - sometimes chocolate ones, but she prefers plain. So be it!

And here is an update for those who read my story two weeks ago. My mother enjoyed her impromptu stay in a nursing home so much that she wanted to stay. Fortunately they had a vacancy arise over the Christmas period, so we will be moving Mum in soon. 

34 comments:

  1. Dear Liz,

    What a sweet tradition. As for your story...uh oh. It was all fun until the tentacle appeared. Happy New Year.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. I'm thinking that tentacle shouldn't have been in the pool

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  3. It's guys like that who give tentacles a bad name.

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  4. Eek! Was not expecting that ending! Good one.

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  5. I was expecting something bad, but not tentacles.

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    1. The title warns you to expect something nasty!

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  6. AT least they got to finish before being horribly killed :-)

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    1. The parents might have survived only to wake to the nightmare of missing children.

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  7. A tentacular terror tale! Nasty but nice Liz.

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  8. great story. one of the best this week. :)

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  9. Excellent story, Liz. I knew something bad would happen - as you say, the title says so - but tentacles and unguarded kids? How could you? ;-)

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  10. Eek. There I was chuckling about the rocking campervan, and then tentacles... Maybe the children shriek loud enough that an action-packed rescue is possible?

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  11. I had a creepy feeling when Delia had a bad feeling, but I wasn't expecting tentacles. Well-done, Liz!

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  12. So happy for your Mum!
    Lovely traditional cake...
    And um... tentacle? No thanks...

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  13. And that's exactly how it would happen! Good story, Liz!

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    1. ANd their parents will never know where they went! Thanks Jade.

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  14. The boogieman in the water. Great start to a horror story.

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  15. Sounds like the parents have already started on replacement kids!

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  16. Nothing good comes from a dark tentacle

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