When the Council declared the old
tree was dangerous, the town mourned. Generations had swung from its branches
and eaten picnics in its shade.
By popular vote, Hal was selected to
carve the remaining trunk, and Running Bear supervised progress from his
folding chair.
“Be careful what spirits you awaken,
boy – trees have long memories.”
Hal laughed, but when he surveyed his
work that evening, shapes had appeared that he didn’t recognize. Shivering, he hurried home.
In the morning there was a track in the grass, as if many feet had danced
around the tree all night.
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I had to resist the temptation to write a story about my elder son, who is in the process of carving the trunk of a tree which was felled beside his house. We also have a tree-carving artist who has made woodland creatures to delight the children - and adults - out of felled trees around our village. So much better than reducing a grand old tree to firewood and wood-pulp.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers and to J S Brand for this week's photograph.
Delightfully eerie!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen!
DeleteIt's always a shame when something which has been there for generations is deemed dangerous.
ReplyDeleteIt's even worse when someone awakens something best left undisturbed :-)
A tree was felled only this week in a garden two doors from ours - I claimed three logs to use as garden seats, I hope the tree doesn't mind!
DeleteOoh, lovely spooky story!
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Thanks Susan.
DeleteLovely atmospheric chiller
ReplyDeleteThanks Neil.
DeleteWhere had those footprints come from, and where did they go? Magical and eerie tale Liz.
ReplyDeleteFirst Nation? Native Americans? Who knows?
DeleteOoh, most mysterious!
ReplyDeleteI think any tree over a certain age must have secrets.
DeletePerfect take on this wonderful tree and its future.
ReplyDeleteOh dear, what have they started?
ReplyDeleteClick to read my FriFic tale!
Nightly shenanigans in the park?
DeleteFantastically mystical, love it :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Annalisa.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteI loved the mystical aspect of this story. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle.
DeleteHe was warned to be careful... I liked this, Liz!
ReplyDeletePerhaps he'll listen next time!
DeleteRiiiight....
Delete😁
Deletewho knows, the track could just be from leafcutter ants displaced when the tree was cut. :)
ReplyDeleteI suppose it could, but spirit dancers are much more likely!
DeleteTree is alive and kicking. May be it remembers Hal's face. So be careful, very careful when you venture out at night.
ReplyDeleteHal will be alright - others felled the tree, he released its soul.
DeleteEerily good. I wonder whether the spirit dancers were pleased or angry.
ReplyDeleteWe could always camp out one night and find out?
DeleteThis is a delightful little fable. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, EL Appleby.
DeleteMaybe Hal should have heeded Running Bear's warning. Chilling tale! I agree, turning trees that are dead into art is a lovely thing to do.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda .
DeleteI wonder if there will be more things than dancing at night... I would keep my door closed and some garlic handy.
ReplyDeleteWouldn't a peace pipe an some tobacco bea better idea?
DeleteLovely story. And I liked your post-story comments, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda - twice!
DeleteBeware the spirits for sure. Having worked with Native Americans for many years, I "know" the belief they have in ancestors and spirits. Nicely captured.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alicia, your approval means a lot.
DeleteWhat fun it must be to be around these artists.
ReplyDeleteJust watching them at work is enjoyment in itself.
DeleteFabulously eerie!
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