MAYHEM
‘A beautiful soul’, they said, over
and over, and her father agreed, forgetting the hours he had walked the streets
searching, the money paid in bribes to save her from arrest, in fines when the
bribes no longer worked, and the shame.
‘A dreadful loss’, they said, and her
mother wept, regretting each bitter argument over stolen jewellery and
housekeeping money, remembering only pudgy arms and baby kisses.
To carry her soul to heaven they launched floating candles, which set the forest alight – their daughter blazing a trail of
mayhem even in death.
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A quick story this week again - the only piece of writing I've done in a flurry of painting walls, filling holes with Polyfilla, and a multitude of trips to the DIY shop. Yesterday I spent half an hour crouched beside the toilet. No, I had not over-indulged the night before - I was pushing filler into gaps behind pipes with my fingers because no tool would fit. The joys of moving house!
Thanks to Carla Bicomong for the photograph which is this week's Friday Fictioneers' prompt, and to Rochelle for organising us, despite her own crammed schedule, on https://rochellewisoff.com/If you are on holiday, have a lovely time, and remember to pack a book. I have two on offer - Helter-Skelter, an historical novel which you can buy by clicking on the cover image on this page, and A Volcanic Race, a fantasy, also available on Amazon.
Just when you thought things couldn't get any worse...an effective piece of flash, Liz.
ReplyDelete(Hope you get all the work finished up soon and settle down to enjoy your new abode! )
Thank you, Seaview - and we are moving in on 31st come what may!
DeleteA lot can be forgiven and forgotten when death comes.
ReplyDeleteThat's so true, Iain.
DeleteMemory is such a deliciously malleable thing. They'll forget the fire too in time
ReplyDeleteAs long as it didn't cause to much damage.
DeleteYes, parents have to walk so many extra miles to protect their child.
ReplyDeleteYou're right - and we always will.
DeleteI really liked your take on the photo prompt. Sad, vivid, believable account of what parents do for their children.
ReplyDeleteAnd well done for squeezing out a great story when you're so busy. I decided I was too busy to contribute this week - you put me to shame! :)
Ah - I wondered where you were! Thanks for commenting.
DeleteVery poignant, Lizy.
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen x
DeleteSuch terrible loss, such a waste of life. Beautifully done, Lizy.
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda.
DeleteSuch a sad existence... and awful ending.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Madam!
Thank you, ma'am!
DeleteVery true to life, and beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jennifer.
Deletesad. i guess parents can only do so much for a child the rest is up to her.
ReplyDeleteI have four children, so I know!
DeleteI've noticed that nobody who ever died tragically was "a grumpy old sod" no matter what they were actually like in life.
ReplyDeleteI smiled at the idea of the forest fire being this girl's "last hurrah" :-)
Thanks Alistair
DeleteI love how you let her wreak havock despite the efforts to 'nice-talk' the deceased.
ReplyDeleteThanks GaH - she couldn't even leave peacefully!
DeletePoignant. Well-told.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteI wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry. So well written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle - which way did you jump in the end?
DeleteThat is so clever. Wherever she is she still causes mayhem. Jilly, Sugar on the Bee.
ReplyDeleteShe's probably still doing it.
DeleteA powerful story of a parent's love. While their daughter was alive, she caused sleepless nights I'm sure and untold agony at her chaotic lifestyle. It doesn't matter what her life looked like, they are left with the pain of that loving bond being broken between child and parent. The ending was brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda. I am simply grateful that the small problems my own four children caused remained that - small!
DeleteWow...this hit me right in the heart!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading my story, Dawn.
DeleteOh, so heart grabbing. Mayhem? You have me wondering.
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