TREE
A tree
is always there –
immovable,
a
living solid friend –
backrest
to the solitary reader,
a
shelter from sudden rain,
the
hollows of its roots
a bed
for summer lovers –
perhaps
a hundred years
of
memories.
You
don’t expect
to wake
one morning
and
find its height
reduced
to length,
the
secret places
in its
roots
indecently
exposed,
and the
unreachable boughs
sad and
defeated
under
your caressing hand.
When a
tree falls
your
whole world rocks
and the
child in you
trembles.
It’s
like coming downstairs
in the
dark night
seeking
comfort,
and
hearing your father cry.
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On seeing Sandra Crook's photograph of a weeping tree, I immediately thought of this poem which I wrote thirty years ago in 1987, the year a hurricane tore down far too many beautiful trees across the south of England. As we have just had another big storm, it seems appropriate to post it here. And it has the requisite number of words!
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Lovely
ReplyDeleteThanks neil x
DeleteOver a million trees apparently were blown over in that storm. Fortunately this week's one was nowhere near as bad.
ReplyDeleteWe dodged a bullet this time, certainly.
DeleteThat last line really ties it up... somehow that would be so unexpected.
ReplyDeleteIt happened to me, and it was devastating. I was only eight.
DeleteExcellent, particularly that second verse which was as graphic a way of describing the scene of a fallen tree as you could wish for. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, sandra.
DeleteOMG
ReplyDeleteYou write a gentle poem about trees, and then thump us with that last stanza
"It’s like coming downstairs
in the dark night
seeking comfort,
and hearing your father cry."
Oof, ouch and other appropriate noises.
That is one potent piece of writing, Lizy.
Thank you for taking the time to comment in detail, Penny.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you compared the falling of a tree to hearing your father cry. Well written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you, Rochelle
DeleteThis is so beautifully written. The Fishicane of '87 was terrible, happily this latest one is leaving us in peace here in the south east corner - so far!
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So you're in the southeast too? We.ve been lucky this time :)
DeleteOh, how wonderful this is! So sad and tender and the sentiment of losing a tree and finding your father crying - perfect. Loved this Liz
ReplyDeleteThank you Lynn
DeleteReally enjoyed it. Great poem. I loved the last stanza, nearly haunting.
ReplyDeleteScott
Mine: https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2017/10/19/from-tree-to-shining-tree-friday-fictioneers/
I still like it thirty years on too. Thanks for commenting, Scott
DeleteOh, so very lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alicia
DeleteThis grabbed me. Trees are such powerful creations. And that last line, wow.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Susan
DeleteIt is shocking - and sad - to see a big tree brought down.
ReplyDeleteIn 1987 we lost four large chestnuts in our village. Those roots were so sad, although my young son was thrilled to collect a whole carrier bag of conkers.
Deleteeffective use of metaphor to bring home a point. well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks plaridel
DeleteIt is like something immovable and forever has been suddenly wiped out. Though I live in the SW, I was attending an attendance interview at Surrey Uni that year and saw the devastation from the train.
ReplyDeleteMy husband was in Germany at the time and saw it on the news. Frantic phone calls ensued!
DeleteThis is done so beautifully Liz, brought tears to my eyes.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dahlia.
DeleteVery nice
ReplyDeleteThanks dawn
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