THE HUSBAND
All promises should be kept, but one
made to your mother is sacred.
When Tony started school, Mum told me
I should always look after him, so I raised my hand in the Scout salute and
promised.
I knew he had a crush on Maggie, but
when we married I assumed he’d find his own wife. Instead he hung around like a
bad smell, even after the children were born.
Last week I finally told him to sling
his hook, but today he came pleading to make up, with a bottle in each pocket.
I should never have drunk it.
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THIRD SIDE OF THE TRIANGLE
Maggie was mine ever since school,
where I sharpened her pencils and protected her from bullies.
After we grew up I taught her to
dance and she fitted my arms perfectly – until my brother seduced her with his
money and flash cars. I still took her flowers, though, when I went round to
share my home-brew with Richard. Then he got jealous of how close Maggie and I
were getting and threw me out, but he couldn’t resist my beer.
After the funeral I tried to comfort Maggie,
but she’s turned against me.
I wonder if she’d like parsnip wine?
Dear Liz,
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you rounded out the triangle. They fit together so well. Brilliant.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle - this is the first time I've double-posted for Friday Fictioneers :)
DeleteI'd say Tony was beyond having a crush. More like an obsession. Maybe Maggie needed a twin sister.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely obsessive - I hope Maggie refuses the wine.
DeleteReads like a Greek tragedy. Thank you for the photo prompt.
ReplyDeleteTracey
Thank you, Tracey x
Deletehe should have taken it slowly and allow maggie to mourn.
ReplyDeleteThat might have worked - until she realised he killed her husband!
DeleteLove the new secrets revealed... Tony was even more of a scumbag than I thought at first.
ReplyDeleteI did wonder if I'd left too much unsaid in the first story! I knew what he'd done, but didn't make it clear enough, I fear.
DeleteOh, crumbs. Not just a poor, love-struck man then, that Tony. More of a petulant sulky psychopath.
ReplyDeleteYou've summed him up nicely, Alistair.
DeleteGood stories all, Liz. Interesting to see the tale from several sides too. Nicely done
ReplyDeleteThanks Lynn - it was fun writing the triangle.
DeleteGreat photo, Liz.
ReplyDeleteAnd loved seeing two sides of the story!
I like the two such disparate viewpoints there. Maggie really needs to watch her back, with that Tony around. I think she'll be needing a restraining order against him, if she wants to stay in the land of the living for long D:
ReplyDeleteYou are so right, Sarah!
DeleteThis does complete the triangle. I loved this mini series!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting twice, Yuhu.
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