THAMES BARGE
We’re hoisting the sails after
water-proofing them when Churchill calls for anything that can sail to bring our
soldiers home.
“We’re going to Dunkirk,” I tell Jed.
“Thames barges ain’t seaworthy,” he
says, but he’s hauling in the anchor as he speaks.
We’re lucky the Channel’s fairly calm,
because our boat rides the waves like a fat drunk, but its flat bottom gets us
closer to shore than bigger ships. Dodging bullets, we pack exhausted men into
the hold like sardines and high-tail it out of there.
Half-way home, Jed grins. “That trip’s got the fish stink out of the
sails, if nowt else!”
I was lucky enough to sail on a refurbished Thames barge once – a large and practical
wooden boat that still smelled of the linseed that had once been its cargo.
These boats were known for their distinctive sails, tan-coloured from the
mixture of red ochre, cod oil and seawater which was used to water-proof them.
I don’t know whether any of these flat-bottomed vessels made it across the
Channel to Dunkirk in 1940 but I hope at least one did, as I have written that
possibility into one of my books!
Thanks, as always, go to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers on her blog https://rochellewisoff.com/ from whence you can follow links to read other stories, and to Fatima Fakier Deria for the photo that is this week's prompt.
That would have been a scary ride! But I can imagine that some barge owners did respond to the call for help at Dunkirk.
ReplyDeleteBargemen are a notoriously tough breed, so they probably did.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteOne thing about writing is historical fiction is inserting the 'what if's' and 'why nots?' Well done story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
I love that thought 'what if' when it strikes!
DeleteWhat a great piece of historical fiction. -- gah learner
DeleteThanks Gah.
DeleteLoved the character voices, I could picture them from faced and determined to do their duty.
ReplyDeleteTheir duty, yes, and also an adventure for those who were too old to serve otherwise.
DeleteGreat story, Liz. I particularly liked: our boat rides the waves like a fat drunk...
ReplyDeleteSusan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
I was pleased with that phrase too, Susan - thank you!
DeleteI love a tiny slice of real people in the midst of a real situation that has become iconic. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThank you Linda - I believe this is the best way to bring such situations to life.
DeleteThis was great, Liz!
ReplyDeleteThank you Dale.
DeleteWhat a delightful take! I really, really enjoyed your story ~ very different indeed. Alicia
ReplyDeleteThaks Alicia - I had to write this one the moment I saw the brown sails.
DeleteOh yes, what a great connection to Dunkirk - even in defeat there is victory
ReplyDeleteOdd, isn't it, that we celebrate that victorious defeat, but not the Battle of Medway 350 years ago when the Dutch navy invaded our shores.
DeleteLove the possibility you've brewed... The attitude of the characters is heartwarming. And your note makes the tale more enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteThere were many sailors with similar attitudes who took their small boats over to Dunkirk in 1940.
DeleteThey must have barged in. Nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDelete*Groans* Thanks Subroto!
DeleteFab flash as usual, Lizy! I've set up my laptop for the duration of the A-Z to be able to comment on Blogger blogs, so can at last SAY SOMETHING!! xx <a http://www.lizbrownleepoet.com
ReplyDeleteWhat a treat to see you here, Liz, and thanks for your comment.
DeleteInteresting take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting, Dahlia.
DeleteThat was a great idea to have a brief story behind YOUR story! My favourite line was 'our boat rides the waves like a fat drunk' - just brilliant! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rebecca.
DeleteI can imagine this, so why not, indeed!
ReplyDeleteI tweeted a link as I always do, and the Thames Barge Trust retweeted my story, so I reckon my guess could be right!
Delete"our boat rides the waves like a fat drunk" A great line. A lovely take on the FF prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you Yuhu.
Deletehahahahaha - great description of the boat, Liz!
ReplyDeletemarion
Sounds like you've sailed on one, Seaview!
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