HENRY’S DAUGHTERS
Henry’s daughters couldn’t fit him into
their busy lives – months could pass without a visit – but Madge, who cleaned his
house, often stayed past her allotted hours to keep him company. Despite vastly
different backgrounds, their friendship flourished.
When Henry fell ill, Madge
telephoned, “Your Dad needs you,” but neither daughter came. Only Madge held
his hand and wept as he died.
After his funeral the daughters
descended on the house like a swarm of locusts, but Madge barred their way with
her no-nonsense arms folded. “You two can bugger off. It’s mine now – we were
married last month.”
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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers on her blog. https://rochellewisoff.com/ and to Shaktiki Sharma for the photo that prompted this week's story. After looking it up on Google, I think this is a Large Painted Locust found only in the Galapagos Islands. A beautiful creature that wreaks havoc wherever it lands.
Ha! Fantastic twist. Good for Madge!
ReplyDeleteYep - serves the daughters right!
ReplyDeleteGood for Madge and serves those ingrates right!
ReplyDeleteI've heard similar stories too many times in real life.
DeleteGo, Madge! Glad those girls got their comeuppance.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me a bit of King Lear (but much shorter).
I never expected to be compared to The Bard! Thank you, Helen :)
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteMadge was the one who truly loved him. She deserved to have it all. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
She did. I hope she can enjoy it without Henry.
DeleteGood going! Nicely done
ReplyDeleteThanks Dahlie.
Delete1Great twist and play on the prompt. They got what they deserved!
ReplyDeleteThey had it coming - or rather, they didn't!
DeleteHah! Good for Madge - love it.
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Travel, Fiction and Photos
And good for Henry for seeing who loved him best.
DeleteSmart of Henry to think ahead!
ReplyDeleteHe knew what his daughters were capable of.
DeleteWonderful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Neel.
DeleteYes!!! I love this ending. Well done
ReplyDeleteThanks Alicia - I'm glad Madge won.
DeleteI love a feel-good ending.
ReplyDeleteSo do I, Sandra - it took some word-juggling to avoid making Madge sound like an opportunist :)
DeleteI think that Henry made the perfect choice... and yes Madge seems to be a good person.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bjorn - I am gladit worked for you!
DeleteHa ha, nice, good for Marge!
ReplyDeleteThanks Aistair.
DeleteHe completely understood the beasts he had spawned. I would've paid to see their faces.
ReplyDeleteI just read your reply to Sandra, and agree. It was cleverly done.
I wonder what their mother was like?
DeleteI love it. Madge deserved it, she really cared.
ReplyDeleteShe did, on both counts. Thank you for commenting.
Deletegreat twist at the end. well done. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Plaridel.
DeleteHaha, I love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dawn.
DeleteThat was great, serves them right!
ReplyDeleteThaks Lore - it does, doesn't it!
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