RATS
Twenty
years we’ve lived here, but I’ve never felt comfortable.
I imagined
the kids drowning, but of course they were soon swimming like ducks, and when
Derek bought a narrow-boat they were ecstatic.
Admittedly
the gently sloping gardens are lovely, but every passing boat brings gawping
strangers and, since a photo of me in a bikini appeared on Facebook, I’ve
stayed indoors.
Then last
week it rained, in biblical proportions.
“We’re
safe,” Derek declared, sitting Canute-like beside the canal bank, but had to
admit defeat when a rat swam past him, heading for our terrace.
When the
water recedes we’re selling up.
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For some reason I thought yesterday was Wednesday, so when I saw the next photo on Rochelle's blog I thought it was the Friday Fictioneers' prompt. So here's the story I wrote yesterday - two for the price of one!
Please feel free to comment on both before you follow the links from https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/ to read other stories.
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COBBLESTONES
The
villagers protested but the mayor carried the vote – the cobblestones that
rattled his Rover’s suspension would be covered with pulverised gravel from his
quarry, which the village could have at cost.
Within
days every carpet was grey with dust, and the men covered their drinks whenever
someone drove past the bar. Complaints poured into the Mayor’s office, but he
shrugged, “What can I do?”
Then the
rains came – a true tropical storm that raced down the steep village street and
washed every grain of grey onto the beach, leaving only ancient cobblestones to
gleam under the next day’s sun.
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And yes - the theme of rain seems prevalent this week - must be due to the weather in Sussex :)
Both excellent reads, Liz!
ReplyDeleteAlways love your work. Can't write more; I'm off to Facebook, looking for a photo . . .
ReplyDeleteThanks Pet. I have deleted the photo.
DeleteI had to stop on a photo of "me" in a bikini on Facebook. Putting myself in your place. Oh dear.
ReplyDeleteOh dear indeed, and you're younger than me!
DeleteTwo for the price of one - How could I resist. Both are excellent
ReplyDeleteThankyou, ladybug.
DeleteA Two-fer! And good job on both!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in, Dale.
DeleteThe 2nd photo is from What Pegman Saw prompt on WordPress, you should try it each Saturday - a slightly different idea to the photo prompt. Both great stories. Took the romance right out of canal boat licing!
ReplyDeleteCan a mere Blogspot blogger enter a Wordpress forum?
DeleteWonderful stories - both of them. Interesting how you carried the idea of too much water in both. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteThaks Alicia - the flood theme was accidental - I only noticed it after I'd posted both!
DeleteThe weather seems to have created a torrent of creativity.
ReplyDeleteOh, very clever, Patsy!
DeleteDouble value on your site today, Liz. Liked them both.
ReplyDeleteThans Sandra. Thanks Sandra. :)
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed both stories. Sorry to confuse. I've gotten involved in a writing prompt run by K Rawson...What Pegman Saw. For that matter you'd be allowed another 50 words on that one. https://whatpegmansaw.com/2017/02/04/hammerfest-norway/
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle. It was my fault for mistaking the day! Perhaps I should have a look at that forum too.
DeleteYou see, we Brits love talking about the weather, and all the better if it inspires such wonderful writing. Well done, Liz!
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen X
Deleteboth were well-written, but i think the first one was better.
ReplyDeleteThanks Plaridel - can you give me a reason?
DeleteEither works for both, really.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dawn, I think!
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