THE MILLS OF GOD
Each of Dusty Miller's first two wives had
drowned in the mill-race. Tragic accidents, he claimed – they’d slipped on the
steps whilst drawing water – but his temper was legendary and people had seen
the bruises.
After failing to find a third wife locally, he settled for a woman
he met in the town tavern.
The first time Dusty raised his fist she
ducked. The second time she struck back. There never was a third time. Somehow
his smock became trapped in the machinery – they had to scrape him off the
wheel to bury him.
Missus Miller III was strangely dry-eyed at his funeral.
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'The mills of God grind slowly / Yet they grind exceeding small / Though with patience He stands waiting, / With exactness grinds He all '
On seeing this week's prompt photo, the 'Mills of God' sprang instantly to my mind - If you've never heard the quote, this link will explain it. http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/2000/l/long52.html
Thanks to https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/ for hosting Friday Fictioneers. a link from her blog will take you to a list of other FF writers whose 100 word stories were also prompted by Sandra Crook's photograph..
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL THE KIND PEOPLE WHO READ AND COMMENT ON MY BLOG.
Dear Liz,
ReplyDeleteI'm betting there weren't too many tears at Mr. Miller's funeral from anyone. Love this tale.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle - I like to think Mrs Miller took over the mill herself.
DeleteGreat story of revenge. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteVengeance took its time but struck in the end.
DeleteGreat story of revenge. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteA woman after my own heart. Good one.
ReplyDeleteAnd after mine, Sandra.
DeleteI think Missus Miller III is now the happy miller... great one.
ReplyDeleteDusty picked the wrong woman, didn't he!
DeleteWell done, Mrs Miller...
ReplyDeleteKarma - or maybe Mrs M - got him in the end.
Deletesweet justice. served him well.
ReplyDeleteHe got his comeuppance eventually.
Deletewow!
ReplyDeleteyou are really are wonderful writer .
i can see brilliant work here that holds the attention .
Best of luck for you writing tasks dear .
Happy new year!
Thank you bailie, and a happy new year to you too.
DeleteGood for the third wife! A delightful story.
ReplyDeleteShe helped God along nicely!
DeleteReally love this one, Liz. It's powerful and clean; not overly stated or falsely compassionate. Great story this week!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dawn - I enjoy the challenge of paring a story down to the bone.
DeleteWell, accidents will happen!
ReplyDeleteParticularly around heavy machinery.
DeleteThose Miller men a re a rough bunch for sure but never underestimate a Miller woman ;)
ReplyDeleteHe met her in a tavern - that should have warned him not to mess with her!
DeleteThird one lucky! Or plain smart :D Good story.
ReplyDeleteI vote for smart, Dahlia!
DeleteBravo Mrs. Miller the Third... About time he find the "right" wife!
ReplyDeleteVery true - third time unlucky for him!
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