As I did this morning.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers on her blog https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/
and to Sean Fallon for the photograph that prompted this week's story. I hope you enjoy it - please leave a comment before moving on :)
DIAMONDS
Sango was
terrified of the dark, but mining was the only employment available – he had no
choice.
After a
year of desperate saving he bought a head torch, which helped, but he was still
afraid. Because his light found diamonds where others failed, the guards looked
indulgently on the spare batteries he always carried.
Then one
evening Sango endured the usual body search, left the mine, and kept on
walking. Many days later, he removed the end of one battery and tipped its contents
into a dealer’s hand.
He bought
a plot of land with the proceeds and grew vegetables.
Brilliant Lizy - if you'll forgive the pun.
ReplyDeleteAnn
Oh, very clever, Ann! and thank you.
DeleteI'm very impressed at such an unexpected interpretation of a potentially boring photo of a bottle of batteries! Well done, Lizy.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan, but batteries are so useful that it left the field wide open.
DeleteGreat take on the prompt Liz. You certainly find unique angles to these prompts.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra - I clearly hace a very twisted mind!
DeleteOh, I LOVE this story. It's perfect. And if you wrote it into a longer story, and sold it to a movie company, you could retire. Seriously. It's totally brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThank you Vijaya - I am retired already but the money would help!
DeleteGood story using the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThank you Eve,
DeleteWonderful. The story unfolded beautifully to a most satisfying ending. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThanks margirene - I wish my novel was as easy to write as this was!
DeleteGood for Sango!
ReplyDeleteI wonder how far back he was planning that - which came first, the batteries or the idea?
DeleteThe last line made me smile.
ReplyDeleteI am happy to start your weekend off cheerfully, Dawn!
Deletehe was lucky not to get caught. he was wise to quit while he was still ahead. :)
ReplyDeleteYou are right on both counts, plandel.
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteDare I say, an enlightening piece? Clever take on the prompt.
Shalom,
Rochelle
I'll let you get away with that as it's you!
DeleteI love it. Great idea, and hooray for Sango.
ReplyDeleteHis patience and ingenuity were rewarded.
DeleteYour mind with its imagination worked overtime on that story, Liz. With your descriptions I could see it happening. Well done. :) --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteThank you Suzanne.
DeleteOh there are thieves I really love when they succeed..
ReplyDeleteSo do I, and he used his loot wisely.
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DeleteHi, new follower here! :) I loved this, very well done indeed!
ReplyDeleteHi WritingNut - welcome to the small, select band of my regular readers! I'm glad you liked the story, and hope you've scrolled back through some others?
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