This week's photo prompt comes, as always, from Rochelle
https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/
Follow the Blue Frog trail from her blog to read how other writers interpreted it.
My version is more fact than fiction this week, but it's what came first to mind!
BURGERS & BUTTERFLIES
We would
eat our burgers battling along Brighton seafront against a howling gale, salt
spray crusting on our faces. Over an espresso coffee later I would lick my spectacles clean – I can still recall the taste, but it was the only way to avoid smears.
‘Men don’t make passes at girls who wear
glasses’ was so ingrained into my consciousness that his insistent wooing
was a shock.
“Only
virgins wear white,” my mother decreed, so I wasn’t even a beautiful bride.
But six months
later my daughter was born, and the woman I was always meant to be emerged from her chrysalis to spread her butterfly wings.
Beautiful, at first I thought it would be like "the River" by Springsteen ... But you managed to grow your narrator to that butterfly.. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn - I shall now have to find and read 'The River'.
DeleteYou managed to write that while packing up your house? Amazing - I don't know how you do it!
ReplyDeleteIt's one way to relax, Susan!
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indira
DeleteQuite evocative. Very much different from all the others!
ReplyDeleteA bit of my own history!
DeleteLoved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks PJ.
DeleteGreat take on the prompt. I love the butterfly reference. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jessie.
DeleteWhen I pack, I can't even whistle. Super work!
ReplyDeleteOften physical work frees the mind to wander, which is why I wrote this!
DeleteDear Liz,
ReplyDeleteThis is simply beautiful. It sounds like your mum had a lot to learn about her daughter.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle - that was nearly 50 years ago and Mum knows me mch better now!
DeleteLovely, Lizy. It's those little details like tasting the salt that make it so different.
ReplyDeleteAnn
Thanks aw - such little details are also what make it memorable. I can never taste spray without remembering.
DeleteI really liked this Lizy. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra.
DeleteSo glad she (you) managed to emerge and spread your wings. Great writing.
ReplyDeleteThere are bits of my wings still unfurling now!
DeleteSuch a beautiful story, well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you snowlocked.
DeleteBeautiful, and powerful, too. Good for the MC.
ReplyDeleteThe MC got there in the end :)
DeleteLovely story - and all the better for being true.
ReplyDeleteThanks Patsy.
DeleteDelightful! I had a burger in Brighton last weekend!
ReplyDeleteRosey Pinkerton's blog
McDonald or Burger King or Uncle Sam?
DeleteThis is one of your bests Liz!
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it Dawn.
DeleteI'm sure to him she was beyond beautiful! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThey made four babies together so she must have been!
DeleteVery different and a very nice take
ReplyDeleteThanks Dee Dee
DeleteLove the image of sea-salt crusting your face. I can taste the salt as well. Very well written :-)
ReplyDeleteCheers Annalisa - I shall walk along that seafront this winter, reliving it all!
DeleteI couldn't see how the opening scene was going to lead to butterflies, but it made perfect - and beautiful - sense. Hope the move goes smoothly.
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda - the packing's going ok but the bureaucracy is killing!
DeleteOh, I so remember that line about girls and glasses... got mine in fourth grade. Lovely piece.
ReplyDeleteHi Alicia - I have worn glasses since I was seven. In my teens boys used to huff on them for a joke. I'm used to them now I'm a grandmother!
DeletePersonally, I always thought girls wearing glasses were kind of cute. There was also an expectation that they were smarter than their counterparts who wore no spectacles. Great story, Liz.
ReplyDeleteI wish you'd been arond in my teens, Russell! Smart wasn't considered attractive then, though of course I am :)
DeleteJust lovely. So many nice little details to bring it to life, too. I love the emerging butterfly image.
ReplyDeleteThanks Margirene - this story simply flowed and from people's reaction it worked!
DeleteThat's lovely. Good luck with the packing...oh and buy some warm clothes. It's freezing here again!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ros - I've already packed the warm clothes - we've been visiting UK over the years and haven't forgotten!
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