tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post9039074224649866972..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: I HEAR THUNDER - a 100 word storyliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-69011099019139899262015-05-27T13:04:15.887+01:002015-05-27T13:04:15.887+01:00Thanks Margirene - I hope so too.Thanks Margirene - I hope so too.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-87525655304982039902015-05-27T12:24:42.531+01:002015-05-27T12:24:42.531+01:00You've built a vivid picture of the world your...You've built a vivid picture of the world your characters are living in, and its terrors. Their closeness at the end is lovely - I'm sure they'll make it.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-64966173024961519392015-05-27T09:31:28.952+01:002015-05-27T09:31:28.952+01:00Thanks Ga H - I hope they got away permanently.Thanks Ga H - I hope they got away permanently.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-68040969356056950602015-05-26T17:15:43.434+01:002015-05-26T17:15:43.434+01:00I'm glad they have a reprieve from the violenc...I'm glad they have a reprieve from the violence. The tension and relief in your story are tangible.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-67291026725604649262015-05-24T14:14:42.232+01:002015-05-24T14:14:42.232+01:00At least in the hills.At least in the hills.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-54514987264055253272015-05-24T12:32:54.373+01:002015-05-24T12:32:54.373+01:00And rain instead of bombs from the sky. Sounds li...And rain instead of bombs from the sky. Sounds like natural order is restored.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-23922497445096389812015-05-24T11:30:08.859+01:002015-05-24T11:30:08.859+01:00Thanks Rochelle - and it's good to be back.Thanks Rochelle - and it's good to be back.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-32916886550447344322015-05-24T11:29:41.507+01:002015-05-24T11:29:41.507+01:00Thanks Perry - we could use some soothing rain her...Thanks Perry - we could use some soothing rain here in Tenerife.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-67415027089902013232015-05-24T11:28:45.904+01:002015-05-24T11:28:45.904+01:00Thank you Sarah for reading into my story so much ...Thank you Sarah for reading into my story so much more than I wrote!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-90211920449110936692015-05-24T10:30:18.135+01:002015-05-24T10:30:18.135+01:00Dear Liz,
The tension is tangible as is the reli...Dear Liz, <br /><br />The tension is tangible as is the relief at the end with the coming rain. Well done. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-37698979909279640452015-05-24T00:42:47.029+01:002015-05-24T00:42:47.029+01:00Nicely done. Soothing rain at the end.Nicely done. Soothing rain at the end.Perry Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13439590071776264237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3599356761249628962015-05-23T18:18:41.700+01:002015-05-23T18:18:41.700+01:00Such a child will probably grow up to flinch at su...Such a child will probably grow up to flinch at such sounds for the rest of her life, rather like a child who has suffered abuse and violence will forever flinch at the sound of angry voices. I like the way the mother in your story points out the rain as a thing of comfort. It creates an image of purification, a washing away of all the bad. Beautifully written. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79690254444509439962015-05-23T15:41:18.182+01:002015-05-23T15:41:18.182+01:00Any returning soldier will tell you they sound the...Any returning soldier will tell you they sound the same to a nervous ear.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-87838305317782772462015-05-23T14:45:43.337+01:002015-05-23T14:45:43.337+01:00Oh such difference between the thunder and guns.. ...Oh such difference between the thunder and guns.. But I can guess it's hard to begin with..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-82411751649048795332015-05-22T17:07:36.531+01:002015-05-22T17:07:36.531+01:00Thanks Sheila. I was bound to tell a mother's ...Thanks Sheila. I was bound to tell a mother's story after a fortnight of family!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-6165619349218944382015-05-22T16:58:05.024+01:002015-05-22T16:58:05.024+01:00A wonderful story. A mother's love knows no bo...A wonderful story. A mother's love knows no bounds. Well done.Sheila Goodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01399493893026314102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-34144179219425428932015-05-22T10:08:40.159+01:002015-05-22T10:08:40.159+01:00Thanks Sandra - at least they got away. We hope to...Thanks Sandra - at least they got away. We hope to do the same soon :)liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-81785001394351893092015-05-22T10:07:46.199+01:002015-05-22T10:07:46.199+01:00Thanks Tracey - there are too many people living u...Thanks Tracey - there are too many people living under that kind of tension these days.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-80414389015006173322015-05-22T06:57:48.501+01:002015-05-22T06:57:48.501+01:00Sounds like a pretty desperate time for both of th...Sounds like a pretty desperate time for both of them. Good luck with selling your place - it's frustrating when you want to move onto the next stage of your life.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-65388947954326587662015-05-22T05:01:12.811+01:002015-05-22T05:01:12.811+01:00I like the tension and the relief at the end. Well...I like the tension and the relief at the end. Well done.<br />Tracey Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com