tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post8038651380116112857..comments2024-03-20T02:24:10.770+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: DEAF JED - a story in 100 wordsliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-72790513829350912632015-03-02T22:09:06.004+00:002015-03-02T22:09:06.004+00:00I believe it helps to see the characters beofre I ...I believe it helps to see the characters beofre I write about them. Thanks MMliz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-48384504868627029352015-03-02T14:07:01.590+00:002015-03-02T14:07:01.590+00:00This is just too sad but you created real characte...This is just too sad but you created real characters in a few words.Maggie Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15938216505505274248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3774651598609078582015-03-01T11:14:35.484+00:002015-03-01T11:14:35.484+00:00Thanks subroto - though they're in the afterli...Thanks subroto - though they're in the afterlife now!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-80129429541821407112015-03-01T11:13:39.717+00:002015-03-01T11:13:39.717+00:00Thanks Rochelle.Thanks Rochelle.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-67648707128709611302015-03-01T00:01:40.575+00:002015-03-01T00:01:40.575+00:00Deaf Jed and Scruff really come to life in this st...Deaf Jed and Scruff really come to life in this story. Nicely done.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3682022462953663922015-02-28T16:19:02.828+00:002015-02-28T16:19:02.828+00:00Dear Liz,
Too bad instinct won out over love. Ve...Dear Liz, <br /><br />Too bad instinct won out over love. Very well done story. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-82451058208986797392015-02-28T12:47:19.815+00:002015-02-28T12:47:19.815+00:00Sad stories abounded on FF this week - there's...Sad stories abounded on FF this week - there's something about that dog :(liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-92094932166918071902015-02-28T11:02:37.646+00:002015-02-28T11:02:37.646+00:00Aaaaw, that's so sad.Aaaaw, that's so sad.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-13184672265638388242015-02-27T22:29:06.136+00:002015-02-27T22:29:06.136+00:00Perhaps one day Jed will come back and fetch Scruf...Perhaps one day Jed will come back and fetch Scruff so they can wander the heavenly tracks together.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-81085982231929920382015-02-27T22:27:44.665+00:002015-02-27T22:27:44.665+00:00Thanks for that thought, Russell, but I'll lea...Thanks for that thought, Russell, but I'll leave the scary stuff to you!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-85060356706600403342015-02-27T21:59:12.160+00:002015-02-27T21:59:12.160+00:00Poor dog and poor Jeff.. and the dog condemned for...Poor dog and poor Jeff.. and the dog condemned for following his instinct that one time... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-2393050095798775222015-02-27T21:58:55.102+00:002015-02-27T21:58:55.102+00:00Do deaf ghosts make any sound? You could make a sc...Do deaf ghosts make any sound? You could make a scary story out of this to tell children when on a camping trip. Maybe have his missing arms and legs trying to get back together.Russell Gayerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05675737193544148651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-72531818063693032172015-02-27T17:11:17.889+00:002015-02-27T17:11:17.889+00:00Poor Jed indeed - and poor Scruff, who never knew ...Poor Jed indeed - and poor Scruff, who never knew what he'd done :(liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58300626770338311822015-02-27T16:13:19.009+00:002015-02-27T16:13:19.009+00:00Poor Jed - abandoned by his dog!Poor Jed - abandoned by his dog!Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-1216610109178479072015-02-27T10:04:32.085+00:002015-02-27T10:04:32.085+00:00If human females could exude the same scented allu...If human females could exude the same scented allure at a bitch dog, the men would be too confused to fight wars.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-22825624873270341602015-02-27T10:02:44.746+00:002015-02-27T10:02:44.746+00:00I'm afraid Scruff was too common a name - shee...I'm afraid Scruff was too common a name - sheerlaziness, to be honest because it's been a stressful week! I am looking forward to joining a decent writing group when we get back to England.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-27187338176903838622015-02-27T07:21:12.628+00:002015-02-27T07:21:12.628+00:00The bitch is back! All men are the same, I guess...The bitch is back! All men are the same, I guess,including Scruff. Poignant tale, well toldPerry Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13439590071776264237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-39203623592012131372015-02-26T22:42:15.211+00:002015-02-26T22:42:15.211+00:00Good ghost story - poor Scruff. Weird that we bot...Good ghost story - poor Scruff. Weird that we both named our dogs Scruff! And my story and Jan Brown's are very similar. I'm in a writing practice group in which this often happens.... Great minds? AliciaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-7428487446380201682015-02-26T21:52:25.559+00:002015-02-26T21:52:25.559+00:00Perhaps they will - if the ghost of a dead bitch d...Perhaps they will - if the ghost of a dead bitch doesn't get there first!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-73476813229024834772015-02-26T21:51:31.183+00:002015-02-26T21:51:31.183+00:00... and again!... and again!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-57788327737528570472015-02-26T21:51:15.521+00:002015-02-26T21:51:15.521+00:00Thanks Patrick.Thanks Patrick.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3111670409792731412015-02-26T20:28:02.741+00:002015-02-26T20:28:02.741+00:00Interesting that people talk about the ghost of Sc...Interesting that people talk about the ghost of Scruff, but not the ghost of Deaf Jed. Perhaps they'll find each other one day on the other side (of the tracks.) :-) Good one, Lizy.<br /><br />janetjanethttp://sustainabilitea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79010518900631686632015-02-26T19:51:09.897+00:002015-02-26T19:51:09.897+00:00Oh Scruff.So like a dog! Great piece of folk lore....Oh Scruff.So like a dog! Great piece of folk lore.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11398961425718731382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-78352037671232540602015-02-26T19:51:03.575+00:002015-02-26T19:51:03.575+00:00Oh Scruff.So like a dog! Great piece of folk lore....Oh Scruff.So like a dog! Great piece of folk lore.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11398961425718731382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-32586459632076445382015-02-26T17:49:53.673+00:002015-02-26T17:49:53.673+00:00Thanks for visiting, iba.Thanks for visiting, iba.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.com