tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post4555672823249922818..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: EMAIL TO THE BUILDER - 100 word storyliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79771380040199191682015-12-07T16:41:36.889+00:002015-12-07T16:41:36.889+00:00Thanks Subroto :)Thanks Subroto :)liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12814199001962147262015-12-07T16:39:40.396+00:002015-12-07T16:39:40.396+00:00thanks for persevering, Roger - and I'm glad y...thanks for persevering, Roger - and I'm glad you enjoyed my story.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-10443522599280158332015-12-07T16:38:46.074+00:002015-12-07T16:38:46.074+00:00You're having a house built? How wonderful - a...You're having a house built? How wonderful - and the best of luck!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-61836438587486620682015-12-07T12:32:02.439+00:002015-12-07T12:32:02.439+00:00Love the official tone in this letter. Very believ...Love the official tone in this letter. Very believable.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3041513593073186462015-12-07T03:07:23.554+00:002015-12-07T03:07:23.554+00:00A unique take on the way to present your story. En...A unique take on the way to present your story. Enjoyed! (My second try to comment... the first one glitched?) Rogerhttps://rogershipp.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-76615298995329942602015-12-07T01:59:17.543+00:002015-12-07T01:59:17.543+00:00This is great. I love the language of the email - ...This is great. I love the language of the email - so polite and understated. I am a bit worried, as we are about to engage a builder to construct our new house. I'll be very careful to monitor its progress after reading your story.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-64631456327197881502015-12-05T20:43:51.777+00:002015-12-05T20:43:51.777+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-6544555393361414462015-12-05T20:39:03.052+00:002015-12-05T20:39:03.052+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-55755243415944208052015-12-05T20:38:53.169+00:002015-12-05T20:38:53.169+00:00Burreaucracy will survive everything!Burreaucracy will survive everything!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-48493986693689305872015-12-05T20:38:15.994+00:002015-12-05T20:38:15.994+00:00Not if you've paid top dollar for a reliable e...Not if you've paid top dollar for a reliable extraction system!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-72252256068393835572015-12-05T13:11:49.518+00:002015-12-05T13:11:49.518+00:00Bureaucracy survives Armageddon? This is a really ...Bureaucracy survives Armageddon? This is a really sad story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-81400999838022655322015-12-04T23:02:28.879+00:002015-12-04T23:02:28.879+00:00Well, if you want to hide from the world's har...Well, if you want to hide from the world's harsh realities underground, you gotta live with the smell and the rats. Great story, I love it.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-64787935875605832632015-12-04T22:17:42.936+00:002015-12-04T22:17:42.936+00:00Especially with no ourside windows!Especially with no ourside windows!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-75520427860128047062015-12-04T19:11:21.035+00:002015-12-04T19:11:21.035+00:00Not a concealed entrance and the sewage would not ...Not a concealed entrance and the sewage would not be a plus. :)Deborah Druckerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05649396302648104610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12754456541147374332015-12-04T16:52:36.171+00:002015-12-04T16:52:36.171+00:00Yhsnkd Sndumsni - and I'm glad the humour came...Yhsnkd Sndumsni - and I'm glad the humour came through.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-43176340861013705042015-12-04T14:56:09.087+00:002015-12-04T14:56:09.087+00:00Isn't it always the case with builders... Nic...Isn't it always the case with builders... Nice format for the story and it was subtly funny.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-17015838582384771352015-12-04T10:10:08.757+00:002015-12-04T10:10:08.757+00:00Especially if the builders have fake qualification...Especially if the builders have fake qualifications. (Guess who's been watching Fake Britain this morning?)liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-56740415718816598162015-12-03T23:23:28.223+00:002015-12-03T23:23:28.223+00:00Great take on the prompt, Liz. The entrance can pr...Great take on the prompt, Liz. The entrance can probably be fixed, but I don't have much confidence in removing the sewage smell.Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-37636384579028867092015-12-03T19:51:44.495+00:002015-12-03T19:51:44.495+00:00Thanks Loma - good builders are even harder to fin...Thanks Loma - good builders are even harder to find!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-521003009671270172015-12-03T19:49:58.476+00:002015-12-03T19:49:58.476+00:00Aren't they all?Aren't they all?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-52141953669017990492015-12-03T18:10:04.609+00:002015-12-03T18:10:04.609+00:00Good help is so hard to find! I love this one!Good help is so hard to find! I love this one!Lornahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18062806840487676760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-48199891670575959862015-12-03T18:00:21.019+00:002015-12-03T18:00:21.019+00:00Those builders are cowboys!Those builders are cowboys!Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-52230216381436633752015-12-03T14:09:08.489+00:002015-12-03T14:09:08.489+00:00Thanks Dale - not so much hidden as obvious!Thanks Dale - not so much hidden as obvious!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-26807720666931798852015-12-03T14:08:37.969+00:002015-12-03T14:08:37.969+00:00Thanks Rochelle. We've had a few building issu...Thanks Rochelle. We've had a few building issues recently, which possibly prompted this take on the photo!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-22395460867243592272015-12-03T13:21:50.422+00:002015-12-03T13:21:50.422+00:00This was a great read! I have to agree, the so-ca...This was a great read! I have to agree, the so-called concealed entrance isn't so much so!Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.com