tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post2027897710616062417..comments2024-03-20T02:24:10.770+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: TROLLEY DOLLIES - flash fictionliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16182256335731889452016-08-03T13:48:21.224+01:002016-08-03T13:48:21.224+01:00Thanks Suzanne xThanks Suzanne xliz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-23930131021086875102016-08-03T10:37:46.382+01:002016-08-03T10:37:46.382+01:00Humorous story, Liz. Interesting point of view and...Humorous story, Liz. Interesting point of view and voice. If they could think and talk, I imagine shopping carts would sound just like that. Good writing. :D --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-53178586300674982752016-08-02T17:10:22.184+01:002016-08-02T17:10:22.184+01:00I saw them wearing pinnies and rollers!I saw them wearing pinnies and rollers!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-49602454450862299232016-08-02T08:46:57.244+01:002016-08-02T08:46:57.244+01:00You'd think their shared predicament would mak...You'd think their shared predicament would make them draw together - I guess not. Funny story, Liz, with a touch of sadness because their voices and spitefulness sound so human.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-32507812853743625922016-08-01T22:06:16.076+01:002016-08-01T22:06:16.076+01:00I just reported the conversation as I heard it!I just reported the conversation as I heard it!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-56322591298293283382016-08-01T15:52:59.686+01:002016-08-01T15:52:59.686+01:00Spiteful, gossipy trolleys? Hilarious and differen...Spiteful, gossipy trolleys? Hilarious and different - well done, Lizy!<br /><br />Susan at<br /><a href="http://susan-a-eamestravelfictionandphotos.blogspot.ie" rel="nofollow">Travel, Fiction and Photos</a><br />Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-31586413442859061482016-08-01T09:41:16.098+01:002016-08-01T09:41:16.098+01:00Thanks Dawn.Thanks Dawn.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-9105302144226410592016-08-01T03:25:02.548+01:002016-08-01T03:25:02.548+01:00Haha..love the dialogue Haha..love the dialogue Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16240178077269198340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-17540442560205198722016-07-30T22:18:21.358+01:002016-07-30T22:18:21.358+01:00You yoo, plaridel? We're both slightly mad!You yoo, plaridel? We're both slightly mad!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-63549408180828611362016-07-30T20:05:47.399+01:002016-07-30T20:05:47.399+01:00if we dare to listen closely, we can really hear t...if we dare to listen closely, we can really hear them talking. :)plaridelhttp://plaridel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-67696636435141461632016-07-29T14:59:06.781+01:002016-07-29T14:59:06.781+01:00Thanks for the prompt, Rochelle!Thanks for the prompt, Rochelle!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-54998562076274180182016-07-29T11:46:54.033+01:002016-07-29T11:46:54.033+01:00Imaginative story, Liz. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Ro...Imaginative story, Liz. Nicely done. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-89015609114107017412016-07-28T22:18:48.346+01:002016-07-28T22:18:48.346+01:00They've heard they're from the shop known ...They've heard they're from the shop known as the Middle Class's Harrods!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-51468628822858098282016-07-28T16:57:14.421+01:002016-07-28T16:57:14.421+01:00Those Waitrose trolleys - there's no talking t...Those Waitrose trolleys - there's no talking to them some days. Nice take.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-70301364480924197122016-07-28T11:34:43.755+01:002016-07-28T11:34:43.755+01:00Thanks Ga H - you can hear their voices, can't...Thanks Ga H - you can hear their voices, can't you?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-1056361050490577572016-07-28T11:10:12.648+01:002016-07-28T11:10:12.648+01:00I love this. Gossips will be the same, made from f...I love this. Gossips will be the same, made from flesh or from wire. Great humour.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-39103823564321075002016-07-28T11:07:04.985+01:002016-07-28T11:07:04.985+01:00Glad you liked it, Robert.Glad you liked it, Robert.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-57008995408365748012016-07-28T11:01:36.504+01:002016-07-28T11:01:36.504+01:00Good one, Liz!
Good one, Liz!<br />RobCromptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05282446256418335464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15628488330432465932016-07-28T10:57:19.065+01:002016-07-28T10:57:19.065+01:00Thank you Michael - the dialogue just popped itno ...Thank you Michael - the dialogue just popped itno my head instantly!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-52523044044273739862016-07-28T10:56:16.479+01:002016-07-28T10:56:16.479+01:00Thanks Helen!Thanks Helen!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-4313799715174960682016-07-28T09:49:08.425+01:002016-07-28T09:49:08.425+01:00Humorous and poignant!Humorous and poignant!Helen Baggott https://www.blogger.com/profile/03672002857462638219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-82757893060748182652016-07-28T09:47:11.859+01:002016-07-28T09:47:11.859+01:00I enjoyed this. Your words brought the picture to ...I enjoyed this. Your words brought the picture to life.goodeyedeershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14614605691786429672noreply@blogger.com