tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post980182988198321090..comments2024-03-28T17:08:28.854+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: THE BURGER VAN - a story in a hundred wordsliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-44535019159068830652018-05-13T19:47:52.061+01:002018-05-13T19:47:52.061+01:00Prodigal son or daughter - the parents would kill ...Prodigal son or daughter - the parents would kill the fatted calf in a heartbeat!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79883430516054773002018-05-13T16:48:14.918+01:002018-05-13T16:48:14.918+01:00I think this happens many times... and the runaway...I think this happens many times... and the runaway feels ashamed and know not that she would be forgiven at once.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-52202201684855915852018-05-13T14:00:47.049+01:002018-05-13T14:00:47.049+01:00Thank you.Thank you.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-56211829218187693692018-05-12T16:02:19.159+01:002018-05-12T16:02:19.159+01:00That last bit was inspired. Bravo!That last bit was inspired. Bravo!Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16240178077269198340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-25817868652733180052018-05-12T15:35:18.096+01:002018-05-12T15:35:18.096+01:00He hasn't given up hope yet. Thanks for commen...He hasn't given up hope yet. Thanks for commenting, Fatima.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-11523334913862644482018-05-12T12:18:17.226+01:002018-05-12T12:18:17.226+01:00There's hope for his redemption and their reun...There's hope for his redemption and their reunion. :)Fatima Fakierhttp://www.fatimafakierwrites.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-76356629748097377502018-05-12T12:03:01.366+01:002018-05-12T12:03:01.366+01:00Glad you agree with me about cities, Jilly.Glad you agree with me about cities, Jilly.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-38066697244574191092018-05-12T12:02:30.148+01:002018-05-12T12:02:30.148+01:00She might - perhaps even tonight.She might - perhaps even tonight.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-4120060767915559932018-05-12T12:02:08.582+01:002018-05-12T12:02:08.582+01:00Thanks Lisa.Thanks Lisa.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-81069137598568193392018-05-12T12:01:56.276+01:002018-05-12T12:01:56.276+01:00Lots of possibilities for an ending.Lots of possibilities for an ending.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-23130701224587191412018-05-12T12:01:11.796+01:002018-05-12T12:01:11.796+01:00So it is! Thanks iam!So it is! Thanks iam!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16805264397243837512018-05-12T12:00:22.412+01:002018-05-12T12:00:22.412+01:00I hope so too. Thanks for visiting.I hope so too. Thanks for visiting.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-7547260319415850482018-05-12T10:20:57.592+01:002018-05-12T10:20:57.592+01:00You have compressed a lot of hurting into one hund...You have compressed a lot of hurting into one hundred words. The city has no redeeming features. I am sure this is true for many people, Jilly, Sugar on the Bee.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-40733307493396643702018-05-12T05:20:44.254+01:002018-05-12T05:20:44.254+01:00I hope his efforts to reconnect bear fruit. :) She...I hope his efforts to reconnect bear fruit. :) She might find a wrap or a cup and one day decide to come out of the shadows...Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-86312624236745600312018-05-12T02:02:25.800+01:002018-05-12T02:02:25.800+01:00So sad. Well-written.So sad. Well-written.lisarey1990@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12623626767963831246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-46414225004075707702018-05-11T22:45:01.735+01:002018-05-11T22:45:01.735+01:00So sad. I wonder if she heard him. I wonder if s...So sad. I wonder if she heard him. I wonder if she'll survive long enough to find him. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-36547285925600596252018-05-11T18:36:11.447+01:002018-05-11T18:36:11.447+01:00Nice version of the Beatles' 'She's Le...Nice version of the Beatles' 'She's Leaving Home'iamthewalrushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00045125562816319748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-50194227422440356022018-05-11T18:13:19.113+01:002018-05-11T18:13:19.113+01:00I hope they get together and mend their relationsh...I hope they get together and mend their relationships. Nice take on the prompt. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01583532697780346943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-13250508243380126472018-05-11T17:58:41.451+01:002018-05-11T17:58:41.451+01:00I hope so too, Luccia. When my son ran away from h...I hope so too, Luccia. When my son ran away from home I did the same thing in a small way, and got him back after three days. Three very long days.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-84640759262484431902018-05-11T17:56:48.674+01:002018-05-11T17:56:48.674+01:00Wow, Penny - you read so much into my 100 words - ...Wow, Penny - you read so much into my 100 words - thank you!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-36070254039171608132018-05-11T17:16:09.543+01:002018-05-11T17:16:09.543+01:00So sad. I know this is a real situation in many fa...So sad. I know this is a real situation in many families. Lack of cummincation and understanding can lead children to mak wrong decisions and it' often too late to make amends. At least this father has realised his mistake. I hope he finds her...Luccia Gray at Rereading Jane Eyrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15970664376298266380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-20123665928997599322018-05-11T17:04:01.996+01:002018-05-11T17:04:01.996+01:00That's a very hard-hitting tale. He's done...That's a very hard-hitting tale. He's done the easy bit - printing the cups and wraps. He's done the hard bit - going out among the night ladies. He hasn't yet done the necessary bit, which is to go out night after night after night looking, asking, gathering information, until he finds her, or finds evidence of what has happened to her.<br />Excellent story, Liz. You used your dislike of the city to fuel a dense, multi-layered piece, with a wonderful contrast between the rich man and his destitute daughter, and a savage critique of the destructive lure of success.Penny Gaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12139119721556370510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-25761527096439837832018-05-11T15:04:11.175+01:002018-05-11T15:04:11.175+01:00Thanks for commenting, Jaya.Thanks for commenting, Jaya.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-72566077550944664102018-05-11T14:06:07.998+01:002018-05-11T14:06:07.998+01:00I hope they get to meet again. Somber tale.
https...I hope they get to meet again. Somber tale.<br /><br />https://trailbrooklane.blogspot.com/2018/05/the-photograph_11.htmlJayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05053043951887070129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-30787555870946391782018-05-11T08:32:28.417+01:002018-05-11T08:32:28.417+01:00You are right, patsy, but perhaps it's the w...You are right, patsy, but perhaps it's the wrong kind of love. liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.com