tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post891058474141613469..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: WAITING - flash fiction - one hundred words inspired by an imageliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58490865335751032082018-06-11T14:48:43.569+01:002018-06-11T14:48:43.569+01:00You are so right - and it's even worse when th...You are so right - and it's even worse when they don't respect you either.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-86059574677280564622018-06-11T14:48:05.491+01:002018-06-11T14:48:05.491+01:00She was fortunate to have that time to reflect.She was fortunate to have that time to reflect.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-48542403792823713902018-06-11T14:24:48.109+01:002018-06-11T14:24:48.109+01:00I was having this conversation with my son yesterd...I was having this conversation with my son yesterday about time being the most valuable thing we have. I find it very disrespectful when someone doesn't appreciate my time. Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16240178077269198340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-65339214041049706152018-06-11T13:39:27.810+01:002018-06-11T13:39:27.810+01:00I love that moment of realisation as she looks out...I love that moment of realisation as she looks out over the crowd - she's nothing to him and deserves better. That's a real kicker and so well done.Lynn Lovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12051665548736162896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3509575235940661112018-06-10T22:02:09.086+01:002018-06-10T22:02:09.086+01:00Been there, burnt the tee shirt. Been there, burnt the tee shirt. liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-25012635419364458682018-06-10T22:01:21.931+01:002018-06-10T22:01:21.931+01:00Precisely. Precisely. liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79217959408995207612018-06-10T17:27:15.495+01:002018-06-10T17:27:15.495+01:00Exactly... being taken for granted is one sure way...Exactly... being taken for granted is one sure way it will never improve.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58917263687004827182018-06-09T19:48:05.387+01:002018-06-09T19:48:05.387+01:00Smart move. No one should feel insignificant in a ...Smart move. No one should feel insignificant in a relationship. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-24549406843732645752018-06-09T18:54:04.638+01:002018-06-09T18:54:04.638+01:00Thanks Jaya. I feel for her - it's difficult t...Thanks Jaya. I feel for her - it's difficult to be the one who makes the break.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-88761700271425769132018-06-09T18:53:20.687+01:002018-06-09T18:53:20.687+01:00Some people take longer than others to wake up. Th...Some people take longer than others to wake up. Thanks for commenting.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-5806288743573355802018-06-09T18:52:46.404+01:002018-06-09T18:52:46.404+01:00It stuck, Jilly, and thank you.It stuck, Jilly, and thank you.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-69257970904023478032018-06-08T22:20:11.624+01:002018-06-08T22:20:11.624+01:00Wonderful take. We never know when we get the stre...Wonderful take. We never know when we get the strength. Good for her.<br /><br />https://trailbrooklane.blogspot.com/2018/06/the-statue.htmlJayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05053043951887070129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-13332626603645522018-06-08T21:12:53.832+01:002018-06-08T21:12:53.832+01:00Love this. There's nothing like suddenly reali...Love this. There's nothing like suddenly realizing you mean very little to someone to let you know you are very worthwhile. Beautifully doneAlicia L. Jamtaashttp://lishwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58791185773713131802018-06-08T13:17:49.001+01:002018-06-08T13:17:49.001+01:00Not sure if my post stuck. Anyway, well done that ...Not sure if my post stuck. Anyway, well done that girl. Bin him off. And a great description of her insignificance to him and her dawning realisation of it, Jilly, Sugar on the Bee.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-47700336888811405342018-06-08T12:35:23.833+01:002018-06-08T12:35:23.833+01:00Dear Liz,
She gets an "atta girl!" I l...Dear Liz, <br /><br />She gets an "atta girl!" I love the jolt of clarity. Well done for the writer and the protagonist. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-29843014142233729802018-06-08T10:31:14.460+01:002018-06-08T10:31:14.460+01:00At least she saw sense before she got in any deepe...At least she saw sense before she got in any deeper.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-81009653306754733142018-06-08T10:30:41.158+01:002018-06-08T10:30:41.158+01:00Wasn't it just!Wasn't it just!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15187874435840676792018-06-08T00:50:06.914+01:002018-06-08T00:50:06.914+01:00The person in this story is so right! They are bet...The person in this story is so right! They are better off without him! Nicely told.lisarey1990@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12623626767963831246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-49046108099330027452018-06-07T22:59:40.793+01:002018-06-07T22:59:40.793+01:00yay, it was about time... :)yay, it was about time... :)plaridelhttp://plaridel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-30542809078383166742018-06-07T18:15:08.814+01:002018-06-07T18:15:08.814+01:00He is! I love the way you write a detailed critiqu...He is! I love the way you write a detailed critique, picking up details I hadn't even considered! Thank you.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-1108288586439384172018-06-07T17:43:07.521+01:002018-06-07T17:43:07.521+01:00I like the way you use the physical viewpoint from...I like the way you use the physical viewpoint from the gallery to emphasise the emotional distance that he keeps from her. He's kept her at arm's length - probably just likes a sense of control - bet he cheats on her too! She's well rid of him!Penny Gaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12139119721556370510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-78642550966098476122018-06-07T16:36:23.408+01:002018-06-07T16:36:23.408+01:00Not before time!Not before time!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-89777932096595050862018-06-07T13:16:18.977+01:002018-06-07T13:16:18.977+01:00Good for her. A confusion over AM and PM has helpe...Good for her. A confusion over AM and PM has helped her to see the light.dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-21025005356475768112018-06-07T12:26:02.926+01:002018-06-07T12:26:02.926+01:00He did her a favour by giving her time to think cl...He did her a favour by giving her time to think clearly.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-35431968154199141372018-06-07T12:25:31.807+01:002018-06-07T12:25:31.807+01:00Thanks Keith.Thanks Keith.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.com