tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post87755027872855139..comments2024-03-18T06:51:29.515+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: CITYSCAPE - Flash Fiction in 100 wordsliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-36625350177530701652016-04-11T21:37:52.511+01:002016-04-11T21:37:52.511+01:00Love this one, Liz, completely unexpected! ~Liz ht...Love this one, Liz, completely unexpected! ~Liz http://www.lizbrownleepoet.comLiz Brownleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00391982640958944942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-31291095456786164152016-04-06T09:46:45.618+01:002016-04-06T09:46:45.618+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16862845475762523722016-04-06T09:46:32.722+01:002016-04-06T09:46:32.722+01:00Never saw the movie - was it a Superhero one?Never saw the movie - was it a Superhero one?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-62709924855374804972016-04-05T18:33:33.889+01:002016-04-05T18:33:33.889+01:00A lot like the movie "Birdman." Glad to ...A lot like the movie "Birdman." Glad to see she is soaring at last.Perry Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13439590071776264237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-49238278997482564442016-04-05T14:55:22.903+01:002016-04-05T14:55:22.903+01:00than you Suzanne - I imagined the bird as elderly ...than you Suzanne - I imagined the bird as elderly and tired of city life, so he retired to the forest.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-61596997268157903152016-04-05T14:54:00.420+01:002016-04-05T14:54:00.420+01:00Thanks margirene. Yes, it would be lovely to be ab...Thanks margirene. Yes, it would be lovely to be able to fly. Do you press the 'publish' button twice, love? I always seem to get two identical comments from you!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16815949076775035522016-04-05T13:42:45.758+01:002016-04-05T13:42:45.758+01:00I thought this was a bird, Liz. It's far bette...I thought this was a bird, Liz. It's far better off in the forest. The picture taken outside your home is fantastic. What a sky! Well done. :) --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15710468789289331862016-04-05T09:39:50.104+01:002016-04-05T09:39:50.104+01:00Fantastic. I love where you took this. The point o...Fantastic. I love where you took this. The point of view is magic. Pity us poor humans who can't take wing and lift up above the street level. Lovely photo you took, too.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-84871554933843709362016-04-05T09:39:39.716+01:002016-04-05T09:39:39.716+01:00Fantastic. I love where you took this. The point o...Fantastic. I love where you took this. The point of view is magic. Pity us poor humans who can't take wing and lift up above the street level. Lovely photo you took, too.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16791666559998457582016-04-03T12:08:09.733+01:002016-04-03T12:08:09.733+01:00Thank you Ga H - I'm glad you saw my bird!Thank you Ga H - I'm glad you saw my bird!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-68354550424139888482016-04-02T22:08:08.097+01:002016-04-02T22:08:08.097+01:00Now that's the kind of jumping off high buildi...Now that's the kind of jumping off high buildings I like: when a pidgeon or other bird does it. Great story, nice misdirection, and that picture is amazing. Such gorgeous colours.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-19900929326651652682016-04-02T09:58:31.806+01:002016-04-02T09:58:31.806+01:00Anyone who has wings is lucky!Anyone who has wings is lucky!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-59446959885719068352016-04-01T23:10:38.558+01:002016-04-01T23:10:38.558+01:00lucky!lucky!plaridelhttp://plsaridel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-31188421240864702082016-03-31T22:18:00.613+01:002016-03-31T22:18:00.613+01:00An enviable freedom, Eve - glad you liked the stor...An enviable freedom, Eve - glad you liked the story.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-19659968694867064042016-03-31T19:52:53.270+01:002016-03-31T19:52:53.270+01:00Really like the flash fiction, Liz. At first I th...Really like the flash fiction, Liz. At first I thought it was about someone who had died, but then I realised with the ending that it was a bird. Birds do have a lot of freedom. Eve Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17714070505632563620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-87119194607399301912016-03-31T18:44:25.394+01:002016-03-31T18:44:25.394+01:00You are right there, oldentimes, and thank you for...You are right there, oldentimes, and thank you for coming back.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-18125182134931412902016-03-31T18:43:28.265+01:002016-03-31T18:43:28.265+01:00Well done, Dale - you get the star mark!Well done, Dale - you get the star mark!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-67646199258443344552016-03-31T17:41:50.330+01:002016-03-31T17:41:50.330+01:00Reincarnation as a pigeon has to be better than be...Reincarnation as a pigeon has to be better than being cooped in a sterile cube.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-11587688334272461352016-03-31T16:45:40.586+01:002016-03-31T16:45:40.586+01:00I pictured your narrator as a bird... and loved it...I pictured your narrator as a bird... and loved it!Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-82547267855760084542016-03-31T16:38:11.154+01:002016-03-31T16:38:11.154+01:00Thanks Susan, and no - I've done the A-Z chall...Thanks Susan, and no - I've done the A-Z challenge several times but haven't got the energy - or the ideas - this year. I wish you luck!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12883603905329728942016-03-31T16:36:40.206+01:002016-03-31T16:36:40.206+01:00Smog? Ugh indeed! I actually had a bird in mind as...Smog? Ugh indeed! I actually had a bird in mind as my narrator, hence the oblique reference to 'earning a crust', but it was obvioiusly TOO oblique!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-26758318443437191662016-03-31T13:42:06.421+01:002016-03-31T13:42:06.421+01:00Very nice - I grew up in the London suburbs and wo...Very nice - I grew up in the London suburbs and worked in London until I escaped to the orange groves of Spain. I did love London... but!<br />Your sunset is gorgeous!<br />Are you doing the A-Z challenge this year, Lizy? I'm giving it a go for the first time. :)Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-28184348039584294312016-03-31T13:34:07.575+01:002016-03-31T13:34:07.575+01:00Dear Liz,
I hope that your narrator truly has wi...Dear Liz, <br /><br />I hope that your narrator truly has wings. Your story put me in mind of a trip to Los Angeles years ago. I remember standing on a hill on Sunset Blvd watching a line of greenish brown smog rise with the sun. Ugh. <br /><br />Well written story. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58871936416429126552016-03-31T13:10:51.768+01:002016-03-31T13:10:51.768+01:00Thanks Annalisa - and the sunset was glorious.Thanks Annalisa - and the sunset was glorious.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12920821713040978162016-03-31T13:10:07.486+01:002016-03-31T13:10:07.486+01:00I worked in London for a while back in my youth. G...I worked in London for a while back in my youth. Give me the country every time!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.com