tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post824271215078944905..comments2024-03-28T17:08:28.854+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: DEPARTMENT STORE - a story in 100 words for Friday Fictioneersliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-18985316708456565702017-11-13T13:08:07.816+00:002017-11-13T13:08:07.816+00:00Thanks Sandra.Thanks Sandra.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-67320500150226119162017-11-13T13:07:51.687+00:002017-11-13T13:07:51.687+00:00It proably helped that they were elderly and looke...It proably helped that they were elderly and looked respectable!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-20046666149204701622017-11-13T13:07:10.198+00:002017-11-13T13:07:10.198+00:00They make their display look like rooms, so should...They make their display look like rooms, so shouldn't be surprised if people feel comfortable enough to sit there.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-33002179966700768752017-11-13T09:54:45.351+00:002017-11-13T09:54:45.351+00:00Great take on the prompt. Great take on the prompt. Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-37809013553048463642017-11-12T20:07:45.003+00:002017-11-12T20:07:45.003+00:00Ha... that's an excellent way to get a job.Ha... that's an excellent way to get a job.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-38695705456312354212017-11-12T17:26:56.481+00:002017-11-12T17:26:56.481+00:00I love this! And yes... I have had the urge to &q...I love this! And yes... I have had the urge to "use" the display in such a way. I'm thinking the store manager should return his fifty bucks...Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-6954190241373748072017-11-12T17:02:05.954+00:002017-11-12T17:02:05.954+00:00Thank you.Thank you.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-52389566893507295252017-11-12T08:21:15.133+00:002017-11-12T08:21:15.133+00:00Fun read. Fun read. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-55932559735637104412017-11-11T16:48:04.328+00:002017-11-11T16:48:04.328+00:00And did you?And did you?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-29975839067634727912017-11-11T16:47:24.670+00:002017-11-11T16:47:24.670+00:00Thank you Dahlia.Thank you Dahlia.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-40180098132349186172017-11-11T16:47:05.292+00:002017-11-11T16:47:05.292+00:00Thanks Penny - you always leave such thoughtful co...Thanks Penny - you always leave such thoughtful comments.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-52846273806210311972017-11-11T13:10:15.860+00:002017-11-11T13:10:15.860+00:00...now you come to mention it!...now you come to mention it!Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-41576876747183638162017-11-11T07:43:37.308+00:002017-11-11T07:43:37.308+00:00A fun enjoyable read. All the best for your book :...A fun enjoyable read. All the best for your book :)Dahliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05936423022434911077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-9901559787029094442017-11-10T17:55:17.426+00:002017-11-10T17:55:17.426+00:00Nice story, Liz. You described the couple's ac...Nice story, Liz. You described the couple's actions with some very telling details - 'settled more comfortably into the cushions" and, especially 'Doreen kicked off her shoes, dug her toes into the artificial grass...'. It makes the scene so vivid. Well written!Penny Gaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12139119721556370510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15066014542167850242017-11-10T15:45:00.624+00:002017-11-10T15:45:00.624+00:00I believe that has happened too, Helen :(I believe that has happened too, Helen :(liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-25411549995014292762017-11-10T15:44:28.681+00:002017-11-10T15:44:28.681+00:00Haven't you ever had the urge to sit on a disp...Haven't you ever had the urge to sit on a display sofa and watch the world go by?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-64486180377599699932017-11-10T14:42:45.084+00:002017-11-10T14:42:45.084+00:00Good ol' Walter and Doreen. The department man...Good ol' Walter and Doreen. The department manager should have been thankful that it wasn't the bathroom department!Helen Laycockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13798216210954894871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12205283374456870732017-11-10T10:33:49.982+00:002017-11-10T10:33:49.982+00:00Absolutely delightful liz! How on earth did you co...Absolutely delightful liz! How on earth did you come up with that?<br /><br /><a href="https://keithsramblings.blogspot.co.uk/2017/11/blog-post_8.html" rel="nofollow">Click to read my FriFic!</a>Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-82556493836944216512017-11-10T10:12:36.297+00:002017-11-10T10:12:36.297+00:00One furniture shop I read about recently were offe...One furniture shop I read about recently were offering potential bed customers a whole night in the store!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-10247162124740929832017-11-10T10:10:30.453+00:002017-11-10T10:10:30.453+00:00Crumbs on his artificial grass? Perish the thought...Crumbs on his artificial grass? Perish the thought!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58993753344912052862017-11-10T10:09:49.584+00:002017-11-10T10:09:49.584+00:00Dear Rochelle - I was going to make it a story of ...Dear Rochelle - I was going to make it a story of pathos but I wasn't in a pathetic mood so I changed it!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-36043935467101393092017-11-10T10:08:18.883+00:002017-11-10T10:08:18.883+00:00Thank you PAtsy.Thank you PAtsy.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-38158135018764745272017-11-10T02:27:28.953+00:002017-11-10T02:27:28.953+00:00Sometimes stuffy old managers have to lighten up -...Sometimes stuffy old managers have to lighten up - this couple had the right idea, and the manager reaped the benefit! Good story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-91224171295897336502017-11-10T01:13:39.239+00:002017-11-10T01:13:39.239+00:00If I was the manager ... I would be buying her lun...If I was the manager ... I would be buying her lunch, ha. Somethings it takes an unexpected event to help your sales plan along. Great story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-31415738040069348002017-11-09T22:49:28.981+00:002017-11-09T22:49:28.981+00:00Dear Liz,
Nothing sells a product like showing t...Dear Liz, <br /><br />Nothing sells a product like showing the customer the proper usage. Cute story. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.com