tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post5197266131860550889..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: EAVESDROPPING - a short story in 100 wordsliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15624515241871481882017-05-24T12:35:20.187+01:002017-05-24T12:35:20.187+01:00But he only heard one sentence - will he jump to t...But he only heard one sentence - will he jump to the same conclusion as I have?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-53058633375280573042017-05-23T16:13:22.645+01:002017-05-23T16:13:22.645+01:00Uh, oh. He was "almost" out of range&quo...Uh, oh. He was "almost" out of range" which means he heard their plans. I wonder if he'll notify the police. Good writing, Liz. :) ---SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-86203370771933731552017-05-23T12:32:05.753+01:002017-05-23T12:32:05.753+01:00It could mean they were 'only' going to sh...It could mean they were 'only' going to shoot some defenceless animals, I suppose :)liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-5409842566360263612017-05-22T22:24:51.261+01:002017-05-22T22:24:51.261+01:00One must never assume... even "bring the guns...One must never assume... even "bring the guns" could mean something else... <br />Fun one, Liz!Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-42689449259171927922017-05-22T19:57:46.383+01:002017-05-22T19:57:46.383+01:00He he - very good - loved the twist ending, Liz.
...He he - very good - loved the twist ending, Liz.<br /><br />Susan A Eames at<br /><a href="http://susan-a-eamestravelfictionandphotos.blogspot.ie" rel="nofollow">Travel, Fiction and Photos</a><br />Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-27727408580781686142017-05-22T19:35:05.679+01:002017-05-22T19:35:05.679+01:00Enjoyed that. Poor innocent Joe...Enjoyed that. Poor innocent Joe...Carolbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05578076528292643928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-51512406778170574282017-05-22T10:22:36.956+01:002017-05-22T10:22:36.956+01:00Ah - but was it Joe's first misreading of the ...Ah - but was it Joe's first misreading of the clues? And will he ever trust his instincts again?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-34948997981520428372017-05-22T10:21:37.745+01:002017-05-22T10:21:37.745+01:00Joe did read their body language as not quite righ...Joe did read their body language as not quite right for his initial assumption, but he still got it badly wrong.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-91417656989955981942017-05-22T10:20:44.878+01:002017-05-22T10:20:44.878+01:00I think it's probably the curse of writers - t...I think it's probably the curse of writers - that and a broad bottom from sitting at the computer!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-586643125861795042017-05-22T10:19:43.574+01:002017-05-22T10:19:43.574+01:00Appearances can be so deceptive.Appearances can be so deceptive.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79733858016827942882017-05-21T17:52:34.464+01:002017-05-21T17:52:34.464+01:00I guess there is always a first time to be surpris...I guess there is always a first time to be surprised... I guess it's a robbery being executed soon.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3745517522871698352017-05-21T14:07:54.849+01:002017-05-21T14:07:54.849+01:00Dear Liz,
A perfect example of you can't alw...Dear Liz, <br /><br />A perfect example of you can't always judge a book by its cover. Well written as always. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-86170549495993604622017-05-21T12:01:13.237+01:002017-05-21T12:01:13.237+01:00I used to commute when I was younger and loved mak...I used to commute when I was younger and loved making up stories about my fellow travellers. I'll never know how accurate I was! Nice take on the prompt.Clare Hempsteadhttps://clarehempstead.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-67571631887836294162017-05-20T20:32:04.824+01:002017-05-20T20:32:04.824+01:00Not what they seem! Nice story.Not what they seem! Nice story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-393585577099051122017-05-20T09:40:17.156+01:002017-05-20T09:40:17.156+01:00Thanks Sascha. Perhaps he won't be so pompous ...Thanks Sascha. Perhaps he won't be so pompous now?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-92016444896168359862017-05-19T20:23:42.487+01:002017-05-19T20:23:42.487+01:00I think Joe's going to have to reevaluate his ...I think Joe's going to have to reevaluate his expert status. Nice job. I like the surprise of it. :)Sascha Darlingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10341908377333394733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-74829070056691428562017-05-19T18:20:23.974+01:002017-05-19T18:20:23.974+01:00Good! Thanks for commenting, Dahlia.Good! Thanks for commenting, Dahlia.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-11401182091523309492017-05-19T17:28:59.360+01:002017-05-19T17:28:59.360+01:00Ahh that was unexpected!Ahh that was unexpected!Dahliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05936423022434911077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-51083887728663430612017-05-19T15:32:53.464+01:002017-05-19T15:32:53.464+01:00Heehee! Thanks for commenting, Keith.Heehee! Thanks for commenting, Keith.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-42656143275774723522017-05-19T13:58:20.712+01:002017-05-19T13:58:20.712+01:00A story that ends with a bang! Excellent.
Click t...A story that ends with a bang! Excellent.<br /><br /><a href="https://keithsramblings.blogspot.co.uk/2017/05/blog-post_17.html" rel="nofollow">Click to read my Friday Fiction </a>Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3782007548433857582017-05-19T10:35:54.727+01:002017-05-19T10:35:54.727+01:00Perhaps he won't be quite so self-assured in f...Perhaps he won't be quite so self-assured in future :)liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-45929184083100070992017-05-19T10:35:00.919+01:002017-05-19T10:35:00.919+01:00Thanks Alicia!
Thanks Alicia!<br />liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-18234024282181889392017-05-19T08:27:47.850+01:002017-05-19T08:27:47.850+01:00It's nice to know that even after all this tim...It's nice to know that even after all this time people can still surprise "expert people-watcher" Joe :-)dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15992620459780366272017-05-19T03:14:39.865+01:002017-05-19T03:14:39.865+01:00Oh, I knew there had to be a twist!!!! Well done.Oh, I knew there had to be a twist!!!! Well done.Aliciahttp://lishwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-6756259406557770832017-05-18T16:55:46.125+01:002017-05-18T16:55:46.125+01:00Did I scare you, Helen?Did I scare you, Helen?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.com