tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post4725681900680178407..comments2024-03-20T02:24:10.770+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: MOONSHINE - a 100 word storyliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger53125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-30415743737236821292015-07-07T15:24:58.376+01:002015-07-07T15:24:58.376+01:00And that's what I should have called my story!...And that's what I should have called my story! Brilliant!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-55887802523055022232015-07-07T15:23:25.224+01:002015-07-07T15:23:25.224+01:00Company car, Irene? No, they only borrowed the muc...Company car, Irene? No, they only borrowed the muck-shifter - the cars were their own!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-26144997474436674602015-07-07T15:22:29.299+01:002015-07-07T15:22:29.299+01:00Yes - I like the W. :)Yes - I like the W. :)liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-68985043708136890792015-07-07T13:19:12.195+01:002015-07-07T13:19:12.195+01:00Yep, definitely a thump... or possibly a thwump (t...Yep, definitely a thump... or possibly a thwump (the added 'w' makes a big difference.)Annalisa Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14943610814274794998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-41301209866845229062015-07-07T12:30:11.903+01:002015-07-07T12:30:11.903+01:00Bangers and smash?? Lots of fun here - I loved it....Bangers and smash?? Lots of fun here - I loved it.margirenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852245574666501383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-43051391162928237622015-07-07T08:41:12.510+01:002015-07-07T08:41:12.510+01:00At least they had the sense to use the company car...At least they had the sense to use the company car and they got the bet money. Don't like the driver's chances though. Good first draft.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652282229264394887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-29812838879645177602015-07-06T22:37:13.420+01:002015-07-06T22:37:13.420+01:00You think a thump rather than a crash? You could b...You think a thump rather than a crash? You could be right - depending on the consistency of the sand! And thanks.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-26484404168536877242015-07-06T21:30:17.370+01:002015-07-06T21:30:17.370+01:00Brilliant first draft, by the way!Brilliant first draft, by the way!Annalisa Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14943610814274794998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-47512831736679050842015-07-06T21:29:50.057+01:002015-07-06T21:29:50.057+01:00Weeeeee-thump!
Just in case you were wondering wh...Weeeeee-thump!<br /><br />Just in case you were wondering what your story would sound like :-)Annalisa Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14943610814274794998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-57089622444886577212015-07-06T10:45:19.837+01:002015-07-06T10:45:19.837+01:00Thanks for visiting and commenting, libertaThanks for visiting and commenting, libertaliz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-23778232714910928612015-07-05T19:39:48.389+01:002015-07-05T19:39:48.389+01:00Well written, and on the first draft, as you say. ...Well written, and on the first draft, as you say. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-29371649822929699482015-07-04T12:52:28.793+01:002015-07-04T12:52:28.793+01:00Oh yes! Very good :) heehee!Oh yes! Very good :) heehee!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-74137167173892207622015-07-04T10:47:35.737+01:002015-07-04T10:47:35.737+01:00Sounds like they were still well tanked up themsel...Sounds like they were still well tanked up themselves! Haha!Rosalind Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05363027308436257933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-91507501807279097272015-07-03T21:23:56.918+01:002015-07-03T21:23:56.918+01:00Thanks Perry - you too!Thanks Perry - you too!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-55524558462252101172015-07-03T21:23:20.527+01:002015-07-03T21:23:20.527+01:00Thanks Ga H - I believe you can make moonshine fro...Thanks Ga H - I believe you can make moonshine from practically anything - after all, poteen is made rom potatoes!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-25561221925936225792015-07-03T18:48:57.809+01:002015-07-03T18:48:57.809+01:00Wish they had drunk it, I would love to have seen ...Wish they had drunk it, I would love to have seen the picture prompt! Write more stories in the car, nice take ...Perry Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13439590071776264237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-60581181572665969152015-07-03T18:27:41.393+01:002015-07-03T18:27:41.393+01:00Hehe. People who know what they're doing, can ...Hehe. People who know what they're doing, can make great moonshine. Me, I'm all theory... Great story, what a fun read.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12745617698024215492015-07-03T16:13:45.672+01:002015-07-03T16:13:45.672+01:00By our age, dear Robert, if you haven't talked...By our age, dear Robert, if you haven't talked to God on the Big White Telephone a few times you've lived a very tame life!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-25030660597704549522015-07-03T12:46:00.370+01:002015-07-03T12:46:00.370+01:00How on earth could you think such a thing! :)
How on earth could you think such a thing! :)<br />RobCromptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05282446256418335464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16897767436826016082015-07-03T12:21:49.466+01:002015-07-03T12:21:49.466+01:00Hi Sally - I wonder what their wives thought of th...Hi Sally - I wonder what their wives thought of this exploit?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-9737030538389199292015-07-03T11:31:41.725+01:002015-07-03T11:31:41.725+01:00I enjoyed reading this. That moonshine has a lot ...I enjoyed reading this. That moonshine has a lot to answer for. Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-51146184966163123352015-07-03T09:29:34.604+01:002015-07-03T09:29:34.604+01:00You look young to me, Dawn, and I didn't drink...You look young to me, Dawn, and I didn't drink poteen till I was 60!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-81397073079185077052015-07-03T09:28:09.075+01:002015-07-03T09:28:09.075+01:00Desert art and a serious hedache!Desert art and a serious hedache!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-45853449408348783022015-07-03T04:35:48.089+01:002015-07-03T04:35:48.089+01:00As old as I am I just drank moonshine for the firs...As old as I am I just drank moonshine for the first time last year. It was peach and although not "good" it wasn't bad ;)Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16240178077269198340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-83051413895793765972015-07-02T23:43:43.105+01:002015-07-02T23:43:43.105+01:00Moonshine could make a person do some very odd thi...Moonshine could make a person do some very odd things, this looks like it turned into artistic fun! Good job!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.com