tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post4227990269071785741..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: FRIDAY FICTION - BLUEliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-91708851213499046142013-12-24T08:08:51.826+00:002013-12-24T08:08:51.826+00:00This was so well told! As I read I was mentally pr...This was so well told! As I read I was mentally preparing a comment about how heart-warming the tale was and then suddenly...dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-59140568350616869922013-12-23T23:13:48.984+00:002013-12-23T23:13:48.984+00:00i like how you were able to perfectly capture the ...i like how you were able to perfectly capture the mind of a child. and the dark twist was so sudden! it caught me off guard. wonderfully done :) happy holidays!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-40918074897810334752013-12-23T12:25:03.804+00:002013-12-23T12:25:03.804+00:00Thank you to those who commented over the weekend ...Thank you to those who commented over the weekend while I was cooking for a party of 20. I like the way Anisik51 wrote her own happy ending!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58866856533373085352013-12-23T09:43:55.541+00:002013-12-23T09:43:55.541+00:00Dear Lizy,
Beautifully told in the child's i...Dear Lizy, <br /><br />Beautifully told in the child's innocent voice. Very effective with a stomach punch at the end. Bravo!<br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-32005090435113070102013-12-23T02:12:52.511+00:002013-12-23T02:12:52.511+00:00I liked the POV on this sad tale. I liked the POV on this sad tale. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-88815560982091869222013-12-23T01:58:38.666+00:002013-12-23T01:58:38.666+00:00Wow, that ending took me by surprise. Creative pie...Wow, that ending took me by surprise. Creative piece!Ruth Schiffmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625363295823548969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-6214216035110906742013-12-22T15:18:20.514+00:002013-12-22T15:18:20.514+00:00Your story illustrates well the mind of a child. I...Your story illustrates well the mind of a child. I'm sure the baby survived - a tantrum! - and his sister came to realise it wasn't her fault anyway. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-9024687723769932072013-12-21T10:01:58.472+00:002013-12-21T10:01:58.472+00:00Children's minds are so literal. The child wil...Children's minds are so literal. The child will probably never voice the guilt and therefore never expunge it.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-58222105547561581702013-12-21T09:00:13.627+00:002013-12-21T09:00:13.627+00:00That's so sad. Believable too.That's so sad. Believable too.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-84128124683972512822013-12-21T05:32:13.949+00:002013-12-21T05:32:13.949+00:00Ah..poor little girl! Such a lovely story that tur...Ah..poor little girl! Such a lovely story that turned so sad. That was wonderful!glynis rankinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10588421769362096375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-9660650414759309892013-12-21T05:04:36.584+00:002013-12-21T05:04:36.584+00:00How frightening for the child, will he live with t...How frightening for the child, will he live with that guilt forever?zainabjavid.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-14897058946087674692013-12-20T14:20:33.642+00:002013-12-20T14:20:33.642+00:00I loved the voice you used. very well told from th...I loved the voice you used. very well told from the point of view of a child, right down to his simple way of thinking and feeling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-20288566329154716672013-12-20T10:37:13.060+00:002013-12-20T10:37:13.060+00:00Inventive little story. Happy holidays.Inventive little story. Happy holidays.Vanessa Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02953359344425030388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-20440625832814635222013-12-20T10:12:56.333+00:002013-12-20T10:12:56.333+00:00Why I wrote something so sad I have no idea - the ...Why I wrote something so sad I have no idea - the imagination's a wonderfully weird thing. Thank you for the compliments folks.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-44371439402961830022013-12-20T09:37:30.285+00:002013-12-20T09:37:30.285+00:00Oh, so beautifully written– capturing the inner wo...Oh, so beautifully written– capturing the inner world and dialogue of a young child. And then, oh how horribly painful and sad. Brilliant this week, Lizy!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16503130129704469882013-12-20T09:00:03.570+00:002013-12-20T09:00:03.570+00:00So sad, but beautifully written.So sad, but beautifully written.Annalisa Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14943610814274794998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-51883549131736299352013-12-20T08:04:39.858+00:002013-12-20T08:04:39.858+00:00A great take on the idea of blue, Liz. I really en...A great take on the idea of blue, Liz. I really enjoyed reading this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-72904043085901717392013-12-19T22:44:54.560+00:002013-12-19T22:44:54.560+00:00thank you all - especially Patrick for commenting ...thank you all - especially Patrick for commenting three times! liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15205674866429781042013-12-19T19:15:35.678+00:002013-12-19T19:15:35.678+00:00Good, Liz. Rather dark, but good.Good, Liz. Rather dark, but good.RobCromptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05282446256418335464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-22629621865132457522013-12-19T18:44:44.585+00:002013-12-19T18:44:44.585+00:00Poor child. Beautifully written.Poor child. Beautifully written.Patrick Prinsloohttp://patrickprinsloo.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-41876747545289663392013-12-19T18:43:05.174+00:002013-12-19T18:43:05.174+00:00PatrickPatrickAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11398961425718731382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-19476225490470815932013-12-19T18:42:52.465+00:002013-12-19T18:42:52.465+00:00Poor child. beautifully told.Poor child. beautifully told.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11398961425718731382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-18191059401869633542013-12-19T18:42:19.923+00:002013-12-19T18:42:19.923+00:00Poor child. beautifully told.Poor child. beautifully told.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11398961425718731382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-30830134274349612592013-12-19T17:54:26.564+00:002013-12-19T17:54:26.564+00:00A tragic tale told through a strong character voic...A tragic tale told through a strong character voice. Good stuff, Lizy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09907389244623218513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-74411296241940477402013-12-19T17:01:08.997+00:002013-12-19T17:01:08.997+00:00Nice story Liz with a gradual twist.Nice story Liz with a gradual twist.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.com