tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post3234694605417949467..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: WHO DARES? a 100 word story for Friday Fictioneersliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16912241336006793612016-10-31T09:36:27.255+00:002016-10-31T09:36:27.255+00:00Tread softly, Dawn!Tread softly, Dawn!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-11816192844740235662016-10-31T05:24:32.137+00:002016-10-31T05:24:32.137+00:00Gee..I want to go see what happened to them...but ...Gee..I want to go see what happened to them...but do I dare...?<br />Enjoyable read!Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16240178077269198340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-54155477097104484272016-10-30T17:48:46.370+00:002016-10-30T17:48:46.370+00:00Sinister or spooky? It's up to you to decide!Sinister or spooky? It's up to you to decide!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-47967233800144788022016-10-29T19:50:35.368+01:002016-10-29T19:50:35.368+01:00Oh! Delightfully open ended! Thanks for leaving us...Oh! Delightfully open ended! Thanks for leaving us wondering. I was almost glad the guards were gone, then everyone else began to disappear.Aliciahttp://lishwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-4809282925930447202016-10-29T09:26:56.949+01:002016-10-29T09:26:56.949+01:00Thanks for commenting,Russell.Thanks for commenting,Russell.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-76605412218875946412016-10-28T22:44:41.875+01:002016-10-28T22:44:41.875+01:00I'm not sure I'd go looking for them just ...I'm not sure I'd go looking for them just yet. A nice open ending.Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-29198017494242887772016-10-28T15:41:26.180+01:002016-10-28T15:41:26.180+01:00Judging by the feeling I was left with after writi...Judging by the feeling I was left with after writing it, I suspect the same.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-47059454969189153452016-10-28T13:05:48.494+01:002016-10-28T13:05:48.494+01:00I hope it was freedom, but somehow I'm suspect...I hope it was freedom, but somehow I'm suspecting that it was something nowhere near so welcome. Nicely done.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-23148084547422080922016-10-28T10:29:03.566+01:002016-10-28T10:29:03.566+01:00I agree, Dale - they're right to be wary.I agree, Dale - they're right to be wary.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15194012064192158892016-10-28T05:16:48.743+01:002016-10-28T05:16:48.743+01:00Something nefarious is going on.... Something nefarious is going on.... Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-38483099431224745692016-10-27T15:30:50.905+01:002016-10-27T15:30:50.905+01:00I'm sure there's a name for this syndrome ...I'm sure there's a name for this syndrome but I can't think what it is.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-46878697756098757132016-10-27T14:57:53.223+01:002016-10-27T14:57:53.223+01:00This is great. Freedom can be scary when you'v...This is great. Freedom can be scary when you've been imprisoned for too long.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-85776561125096175772016-10-27T14:39:35.616+01:002016-10-27T14:39:35.616+01:00Thank you Claire.Thank you Claire.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-76769203852972764072016-10-27T14:38:55.084+01:002016-10-27T14:38:55.084+01:00Thanks Rochelle. I felt bleak after I'd writte...Thanks Rochelle. I felt bleak after I'd written it.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-39418582287498546892016-10-27T12:29:14.134+01:002016-10-27T12:29:14.134+01:00Dear Liz,
It's my hope that they escaped to ...Dear Liz, <br /><br />It's my hope that they escaped to freedom. Bleak and oppressive atmosphere. Well done. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-72398367094416958122016-10-26T22:38:03.419+01:002016-10-26T22:38:03.419+01:00thanks for commenting. Yolandethanks for commenting. Yolandeliz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-34450806932385484262016-10-26T19:27:09.590+01:002016-10-26T19:27:09.590+01:00The unknown, so scary! Well done!The unknown, so scary! Well done!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-40582336678632669292016-10-26T17:44:17.610+01:002016-10-26T17:44:17.610+01:00Ooh, I really like this. Very cryptic. Ooh, I really like this. Very cryptic. Claire Fullerhttp://www.clairefuller.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-25388684369567949062016-10-26T17:35:04.876+01:002016-10-26T17:35:04.876+01:00Have I left you wondering what happened? Good!Have I left you wondering what happened? Good!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-13521012981270876642016-10-26T17:34:24.763+01:002016-10-26T17:34:24.763+01:00So you haven't made up your own ending, Sandra...So you haven't made up your own ending, Sandra?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79119909049639409502016-10-26T17:30:28.971+01:002016-10-26T17:30:28.971+01:00Another thought-provoking piece. Another thought-provoking piece. Helen Baggott https://www.blogger.com/profile/03672002857462638219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-50520545458280801242016-10-26T17:23:04.183+01:002016-10-26T17:23:04.183+01:00Most intriguing. I think you definitely should do...Most intriguing. I think you definitely should do a follow up post that allows you more than 100 words and tell us, tell us, tell us ...Sandra Connerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17879983044958994786noreply@blogger.com