tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post2973169718768465175..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: GANG WARFARE - a story in one hundred wordsliz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-49962195948925874782017-11-22T10:06:59.697+00:002017-11-22T10:06:59.697+00:00Thank you and thank you, Suzanne.Thank you and thank you, Suzanne.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-9271101574434261012017-11-22T10:06:33.989+00:002017-11-22T10:06:33.989+00:00He probably crawled out, recovered, made his fortu...He probably crawled out, recovered, made his fortune and never spoke to them again. Will that do as a happy ending?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-31860773189050413212017-11-22T10:05:21.044+00:002017-11-22T10:05:21.044+00:00Thank you Dawn.Thank you Dawn.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-30099481530373707462017-11-22T09:47:16.954+00:002017-11-22T09:47:16.954+00:00Heartrending story told from a child's viewpoi...Heartrending story told from a child's viewpoint, Liz. Good writing. All the best with your books. :) --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-5466814463458736852017-11-22T06:39:22.999+00:002017-11-22T06:39:22.999+00:00I could just picture this. Horrid friends that Kev...I could just picture this. Horrid friends that Kevin has. Hope he gets out and dumps their sorry arsesDalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-68004497691119970532017-11-22T01:49:40.673+00:002017-11-22T01:49:40.673+00:00Great voice Liz. Great voice Liz. Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16240178077269198340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-69553846766215422742017-11-20T12:25:12.220+00:002017-11-20T12:25:12.220+00:00More than likely.More than likely.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79111103520170772382017-11-20T12:24:52.063+00:002017-11-20T12:24:52.063+00:00Thank you Clare - I lost count of the number of ti...Thank you Clare - I lost count of the number of times I heard those words from my own kids!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-78783240874785976322017-11-19T22:05:06.899+00:002017-11-19T22:05:06.899+00:00I don't doubt that similar things have really ...I don't doubt that similar things have really happened.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-75632190790768455802017-11-19T15:20:16.174+00:002017-11-19T15:20:16.174+00:00'I didn't mean it' or 'It wasn'...'I didn't mean it' or 'It wasn't my fault' are the eternal refrains of youngsters caught out. Well captured.Clare Hempsteadhttps://clarehempstead.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-69841006923994199152017-11-19T08:10:22.190+00:002017-11-19T08:10:22.190+00:00Is this your first confession?Is this your first confession?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-27437111856430151052017-11-18T21:23:21.797+00:002017-11-18T21:23:21.797+00:00How easy child plays can turn into disaster... i r...How easy child plays can turn into disaster... i remember once when I set fire to a mailbox... I was never found out, and so happy that the house didn't catch fire..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-29729596273550876312017-11-18T16:44:29.304+00:002017-11-18T16:44:29.304+00:00Thaks Irene.Thaks Irene.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-55611498150974972392017-11-18T01:42:20.025+00:002017-11-18T01:42:20.025+00:00Great story. You could hear the remorse quickly ch...Great story. You could hear the remorse quickly change to it was their fault, as a true gang would have looked after their own.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05806564703785724033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12684068850135886002017-11-17T20:46:36.057+00:002017-11-17T20:46:36.057+00:00Someone else who writes their own happey ending!Someone else who writes their own happey ending!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-24853115443444155882017-11-17T20:45:12.596+00:002017-11-17T20:45:12.596+00:00It is, isn't it. Thanks for commenting.It is, isn't it. Thanks for commenting.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-32173031072956804232017-11-17T20:44:07.490+00:002017-11-17T20:44:07.490+00:00Thank you Karen.Thank you Karen.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-92113914712607594782017-11-17T20:18:40.177+00:002017-11-17T20:18:40.177+00:00Maybe Ginge and her crew rescued poor Kevin. I ho...Maybe Ginge and her crew rescued poor Kevin. I hope so. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-41428378367414546682017-11-17T18:21:37.325+00:002017-11-17T18:21:37.325+00:00Scary in so many ways.Scary in so many ways.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-38881533564174088142017-11-17T16:34:26.354+00:002017-11-17T16:34:26.354+00:00Great story. The voice sings!Great story. The voice sings!krawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11761639390474707701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-74792512211931296612017-11-17T16:32:12.305+00:002017-11-17T16:32:12.305+00:00Much too quick - a future politician?Much too quick - a future politician?liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79241198484121677362017-11-17T16:31:42.074+00:002017-11-17T16:31:42.074+00:00Well put, Lore, and thank you.Well put, Lore, and thank you.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-12918659667414032222017-11-17T15:50:08.910+00:002017-11-17T15:50:08.910+00:00Yes, prank can turn tragic. He was quick to take h...Yes, prank can turn tragic. He was quick to take himself out of the blame. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-91395238082606670662017-11-17T14:25:32.046+00:002017-11-17T14:25:32.046+00:00From prank to tragedy, we don't even realize h...From prank to tragedy, we don't even realize how close to the edge we walk. Great story!Snow's Fissures and Fractureshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16222169962786066330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-21291214444349344312017-11-17T08:50:00.831+00:002017-11-17T08:50:00.831+00:00Ooh, Liz, that packed a punch!
Convincing writing....Ooh, Liz, that packed a punch!<br />Convincing writing.<br />Well done.Helen Laycockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17803774319163281358noreply@blogger.com