tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post1075866872392233873..comments2024-03-29T08:31:19.882+00:00Comments on lizy-writes: TROOP SHIP - a hundred words liz younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-39012657075974923882017-10-09T14:18:06.780+01:002017-10-09T14:18:06.780+01:00Thanks DeeDee xThanks DeeDee xliz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-17596978803364795492017-10-09T12:44:39.063+01:002017-10-09T12:44:39.063+01:00Wow.Awesome read
Click Here to see what Mrs. Das...Wow.Awesome read<br /><br /><a href="http://mrsdashsayss.blogspot.com/2017/10/ff-moonlit.html" rel="nofollow"> Click Here to see what Mrs. Dash Says</a><br /><br />Deepahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764125425140331692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-64588210495369701552017-10-09T11:20:04.304+01:002017-10-09T11:20:04.304+01:00Thanks VaradThanks Varadliz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-42921463995739880172017-10-09T11:19:48.061+01:002017-10-09T11:19:48.061+01:00Thanks Dawn - I'm hoping an agent will think s...Thanks Dawn - I'm hoping an agent will think so too!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-15109643000888903842017-10-09T11:19:23.339+01:002017-10-09T11:19:23.339+01:00You're probably right, AlistairYou're probably right, Alistairliz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-52648761570216086292017-10-09T11:18:43.421+01:002017-10-09T11:18:43.421+01:00He faced an uncertain future.He faced an uncertain future.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-39688782923815960802017-10-06T18:34:05.912+01:002017-10-06T18:34:05.912+01:00Fantastic writing. Good luck with your book. Cheer...Fantastic writing. Good luck with your book. Cheers, VaradVaradharajanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08020934214731411542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-46121027488230859372017-10-06T16:34:59.652+01:002017-10-06T16:34:59.652+01:00Good luck with your book. It sounds interesting. Good luck with your book. It sounds interesting. Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16240178077269198340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-79997295593265653572017-10-06T07:53:13.788+01:002017-10-06T07:53:13.788+01:00I'm an "exhilaration" kind of person...I'm an "exhilaration" kind of person at sea :-) They'll both be feeling the same fear when they arrive, though.dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-23853122662482477622017-10-06T02:17:28.817+01:002017-10-06T02:17:28.817+01:00good for him. enjoy the moment while he can. :)good for him. enjoy the moment while he can. :)plaridelhttp://plaridel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-16463792254454332902017-10-05T18:21:46.064+01:002017-10-05T18:21:46.064+01:00I love the drama of them!I love the drama of them!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-89394780520592122542017-10-05T18:21:20.551+01:002017-10-05T18:21:20.551+01:00Thanks Linda.Thanks Linda.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-50877835681150860172017-10-05T17:49:23.843+01:002017-10-05T17:49:23.843+01:00Poor Bert. I'd probably be right there beside...Poor Bert. I'd probably be right there beside him with someone holding on to my belt. Made me a little seasick just to read it--which means you wrote it extremely well :)Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-76124973551074790902017-10-05T17:18:21.706+01:002017-10-05T17:18:21.706+01:00Rough seas can be very exhilerating – as long as y...Rough seas can be very exhilerating – as long as you don't get queasy.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-32370312724557865322017-10-05T10:08:06.874+01:002017-10-05T10:08:06.874+01:00Many years ago I escorted a youth club group to Fr...Many years ago I escorted a youth club group to France. There was a Force 8 gale on our way back, and I think I was the only person on the ferry who wasn't throwing up.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-63229744127544057982017-10-05T10:06:49.580+01:002017-10-05T10:06:49.580+01:00Gosh, thanks, Marley!Gosh, thanks, Marley!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-85033960403493258392017-10-05T10:06:31.016+01:002017-10-05T10:06:31.016+01:00It isn't easy to cut it down - I started with ...It isn't easy to cut it down - I started with a 270 word extract!liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-65668777279586195652017-10-05T10:05:46.413+01:002017-10-05T10:05:46.413+01:00Thanks Bjorn.Thanks Bjorn.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-3101059078422271242017-10-05T10:05:26.802+01:002017-10-05T10:05:26.802+01:00It might.It might.liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-207874078167007002017-10-05T10:05:11.830+01:002017-10-05T10:05:11.830+01:00When I get the book published ...When I get the book published ...liz younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16289501717229347872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-81435821701522536672017-10-05T09:59:33.461+01:002017-10-05T09:59:33.461+01:00Such a graphic piece. It's certainly not a tri...Such a graphic piece. It's certainly not a trip I would wish to take.<br /><br /><a href="https://keithsramblings.blogspot.co.uk/2017/10/blog-post_4.html" rel="nofollow">Click to read my FriFic!</a>Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-91342127572627157702017-10-05T05:09:53.879+01:002017-10-05T05:09:53.879+01:00This is really good. I especially like this:
&quo...This is really good. I especially like this:<br /><br />"The dark grey waves lifted and fell all the way to a horizon almost as grey, needles of spray lacerated his cheeks"marley rainehttp://marleyraine.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-13796557555404875212017-10-04T20:16:48.552+01:002017-10-04T20:16:48.552+01:00Dear Liz,
I know how it is to cut an excerpt to ...Dear Liz, <br /><br />I know how it is to cut an excerpt to fit and still make sense. Sometimes it's more work than writing a whole new story. <br />Intriguing and visual piece. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-66456250488528876252017-10-04T20:01:43.093+01:002017-10-04T20:01:43.093+01:00I can see this happening, and I can see this scene...I can see this happening, and I can see this scene playing out more times with reversed setting... love it.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7872436458316103784.post-48506639225718715412017-10-04T19:54:59.331+01:002017-10-04T19:54:59.331+01:00That sheer exhilaration might disappear once they ...That sheer exhilaration might disappear once they arrive at their destination... <br />Great dialogue and storyDalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.com